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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i lovedddd it.
more sooooon.
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more sooooon.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT chapter (!!!!!)
by far one of the best :DD
but SUCH A CLIFF HANGER!
omg... i don't even know what to do!
the build up between Shawn and Uri...
you nailed it! (damn that tree sap!)
and their parents! i was so scared
that they were going to get caught!
i wonder when they're REALLY going to figure out
what's going on between their sons :BB
I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
you, my friend, totally rock :D
- Jade
by far one of the best :DD
but SUCH A CLIFF HANGER!
omg... i don't even know what to do!
the build up between Shawn and Uri...
you nailed it! (damn that tree sap!)
and their parents! i was so scared
that they were going to get caught!
i wonder when they're REALLY going to figure out
what's going on between their sons :BB
I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
you, my friend, totally rock :D
- Jade
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one long chapter but I enjoyed reading it :) You did a good job with all the fillers I think, you always worry for nothing, heheh.
That scene in the woods was hot, though I was kinda scared that mom would pop out from somewhere after spying on them or trying to find them, now that woukd have been awkward!
And I think Shawns plan for them to go to college together and live together is cute especially when he seems to have thought of it for awhile now. I hope it works for them!
I feel sorry for Uri though, Shawn should have told him first of keeping up with his plan to move, though if he was to get his own place somewhere near it could actually work in their favour; Uri goes for a sleep over and they wouldn't have to worry about mom walking in on them unexpectantly. But you won't let them off that easily, righ? *pats Uri and Shawn.*
Okay thanks for this chapter, you did a great job as always!
That scene in the woods was hot, though I was kinda scared that mom would pop out from somewhere after spying on them or trying to find them, now that woukd have been awkward!
And I think Shawns plan for them to go to college together and live together is cute especially when he seems to have thought of it for awhile now. I hope it works for them!
I feel sorry for Uri though, Shawn should have told him first of keeping up with his plan to move, though if he was to get his own place somewhere near it could actually work in their favour; Uri goes for a sleep over and they wouldn't have to worry about mom walking in on them unexpectantly. But you won't let them off that easily, righ? *pats Uri and Shawn.*
Okay thanks for this chapter, you did a great job as always!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, my. I wonder why Shawn's moving out... But I guess we'll find out next chapter. Glad to see that this story's updating again! I really missed it. Poor Uri... I doubt he'll get to go live with Shawn... unless he visits daily somehow...
I was so scared when their mom sort of found out but at least drastic action wasn't taken!
I was so scared when their mom sort of found out but at least drastic action wasn't taken!
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it loved it loved it!!!! i'm so glad you updated it brightened my weekend!!!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeahhhhhh ! New chapter !
It's not bad at all ! I know you don't like it but it's great !!
A little slower than the other perhaps...
I wondered why Shawn changes his mind ?!
It's not bad at all ! I know you don't like it but it's great !!
A little slower than the other perhaps...
I wondered why Shawn changes his mind ?!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was... quite a few steps =P
Uri freaking out and wanting limits was to be expected after the previous chapter, so it wasn't exactly full of surprises. But you have a good way of writing "filler" chapters with your descriptions of Uri's everyday life and philosophical musings. They never get boring. Also, the tree scene was extremely hot.
What we loyal readers need now are mainly three things: more UST =), closure with poor Rane, and getting the family relationships straight... ;)
Uri freaking out and wanting limits was to be expected after the previous chapter, so it wasn't exactly full of surprises. But you have a good way of writing "filler" chapters with your descriptions of Uri's everyday life and philosophical musings. They never get boring. Also, the tree scene was extremely hot.
What we loyal readers need now are mainly three things: more UST =), closure with poor Rane, and getting the family relationships straight... ;)
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there :) I spent soooo many hours reading all chapters the past couple days and omg one of the most realistic incest stories I've ever read. I've also read your oneshots because I can't get enough lol *blushes* I absolutely love Uri and Shawn and I am sooo hooked on them.
I'm so glad you're making this life-like, in the latest chapters, them having to deal with it in real life. The parents...ahhh what a scary thing. Max and Rane knowing is also another obstacle that needs to be dealt with. Secrets are only secrets for so long. Wow! I'm thinking Uri and Shawn might need to move somewhere else! Far from everyone hehe Cuz I don't want them apart! Such a tragic story because you *know* they are each other's soul mate (the romantic bit in me :D) and yet they *shouldn't* be together and it will always be a struggle for them.
Love love love this and maybe a sequel in the future? *bats eyelashes*
I'm so glad you're making this life-like, in the latest chapters, them having to deal with it in real life. The parents...ahhh what a scary thing. Max and Rane knowing is also another obstacle that needs to be dealt with. Secrets are only secrets for so long. Wow! I'm thinking Uri and Shawn might need to move somewhere else! Far from everyone hehe Cuz I don't want them apart! Such a tragic story because you *know* they are each other's soul mate (the romantic bit in me :D) and yet they *shouldn't* be together and it will always be a struggle for them.
Love love love this and maybe a sequel in the future? *bats eyelashes*
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello there Queen of Angst!
I just wanted to let you know, that I still really like this story. It's one of the best here on aff! Oh, I still think you overdo it a little with the angst, but it wouldn't be a teeta-story otherwise, I assume. *grins* I still think there is some secret in this family, that Uri may not be the son of Pat and... forget the dad's name... because of this letter, because of the remark of Uri's mom that she was glad that Shawn was okay with whatever happened, because of Uri's grandparents and because I feel like there is one! :-)
I'm glad things with your mom are better and I hope you find the time and muse to write more!
Nathaniel
p.s. Don't make Uri a bottom. It's so cliché and yaoi like. I know that there are homosexuals out there who exclusively are either bottom or top, but they are the minority. But if you look at the stories here, one could assume it's the normal state... *smiles* On the other side it's your story... *waves* Bye!
I just wanted to let you know, that I still really like this story. It's one of the best here on aff! Oh, I still think you overdo it a little with the angst, but it wouldn't be a teeta-story otherwise, I assume. *grins* I still think there is some secret in this family, that Uri may not be the son of Pat and... forget the dad's name... because of this letter, because of the remark of Uri's mom that she was glad that Shawn was okay with whatever happened, because of Uri's grandparents and because I feel like there is one! :-)
I'm glad things with your mom are better and I hope you find the time and muse to write more!
Nathaniel
p.s. Don't make Uri a bottom. It's so cliché and yaoi like. I know that there are homosexuals out there who exclusively are either bottom or top, but they are the minority. But if you look at the stories here, one could assume it's the normal state... *smiles* On the other side it's your story... *waves* Bye!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Misses you! The long chapter helped ease my pain:) That is one of the reason I enjoy your story so much. The long chapters allows me to get into the story to see and feel what Shawn and Uri and going though. ^_^