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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person Rora
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No way! I never thought Shawn could act like that, or do anything to hurt him. So exciting! Thanks for updating. I can't believe there's only 2 more chapters.
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!


omg.
whats happeninggg???

haha.
good though.
but shit.
post sooooooon.
:D
person Arsinen
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was....so unexpected. Wow. Now you are obligated to update. So not cool you can't leave people hanging like that. More secrets I see. Damn I can't wait you really need to update fast. *pouts* Please i'll give you cookies and a strawberry cake and some ice cream. *puupy eyes*
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
w-what.
... what.
...... NOOO WHAT. ;_;

i don't have anything coherent to say, oh noooo!
I also have to agree that I am hoping with ALL OF MY BEING that this is just uri feeling guilty about kissing rane again or SOMETHING and not real fhfsghjg!
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh please let that have been a bad dream! I can only see two directions for this story to continue on in otherwise: either Uri and Shawn part ways, or they stay together -and taking recent abusive behaviour into account that's a dismal picture- despite the fact that any rational being would leave/break it off if they could. Please don't let it come to that, you've crossed the line from intriguing angst into downright cruelty, and I'm sorry to say it (because I did love this story) but I think you'll lose readers over this. Or perhaps society really is as twisted as the soap-box-preaching moralists would lead us to believe, a bleak thought indeed.
person kubomi
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD.

If you don't update this baby soon, I swear I will kill myself with anticipation. No joke.

Seriously though, this chapter contains so many of the plot lines that i've suspected and you've hinted at, i've been unable to tear myself away, even with my sister coming to harass me out of my room!

Please don't keep me hanging!
person aoe
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENED. OMG. LATEST CHAPTER. /DIES/ THINGS WERE GOING SO WELL. ;_______________; cliffhanger is cliffhangery good. :D i enjoy it muchlies.
person Jenna T.
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TEETA!!!!!!!!!
YOU COME BACK HERE, MISSY!

I KNEW IT
OMGOMGOMGOMOGMOMGOMOGOMOMOGMOMG
I SO KNEWWWW ITTTTTTTT

Also...
uh
Shawn...just...what..WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU

Seriously, though, Uri didn't even try to explain. What the ???IDJI!!!! whats going onnnnnnnn

I can't say the Mine wasn't creepily cute but...uh...seriously.
Shawn.

DOJSOJODKAAAAASSDDFFGHKL

whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
person Laie
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG... I knew it, I f*cking knew it... Some things Shawn said made me think he was hiding something about his bloodties with our main character... Goddammit, just when things were starting to look better... :(

Please update soon!
person Koira
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that's lots of... overdue matters >.<