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GRMPGFHYRGFCYT!!!!!!!

*cries* Yes... better run. I can't... I can't believe the double cliff-hanger... That was... OHMYYYYYGOOOOODDDDDD!!!!!!!

T_T I'm pretty sure the Geneva Convention must have a special paragraph just to cover this sort of mistreatment.... *pouts* Evil.

*takes a deep breath*

Oooohkey.... Now calmer.
I have to say that, for me, cousin is still a bit too close for my taste. LOL Maybe even more uncomfortable to me that brothers because I've had more ties to cousins than to my half-brothers. But Cousins is OK (I was hoping the aunt thingie would just be something to send us off-road and that Uri or Shawn would still not be related by blood).
What I'm really uncomfortable is with the almost-rape. Let me explain, I've read stories where this happens. Rape by jealousy and much much worse. I don't have a problem with it per se in fiction. But it has to fit the story. There has to be a development previous to is as well as afterwards. But in this story, it feels too sudden. I don't know exactly why exactly it looks so OOC. Maybe the characters weren't twisted enough previously to now justify this final violence. And there are only 2 chapters left, which makes me wonder if you'll be able to develop their state of mind enough to give it a final happy ending that justifies Shawn snapping in such a major way. Of course the dream explanation could be. That finally something in Uri snapped and he dreamt the whole thing and gave him the clue that they are cousins and not brothers.

Anyway, I'm really really looking forward how things works after this massive horrid cliff-hanger that, I insists, I'm pretty sure falls into human rights violation. XDDDD The massive aneurysm you almost gave me can't be legal!!!!

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the truth finally comes out!! i knew there was something !!! i loved this chapter sooooo amazing! i can't believe shawn is being so rough and oh my god is all i can say!!! please please update soon i need to know what happens!!!!!!!!

Oh, I knew they weren't brothers! Shocked though, that they're cousins. I thought one of them, maybe Shawn, was adopted. And, the RaneDan was a nice surprise. I really hope things work out between them. I can't wait for the next chapter!

So. Help. Me. GOD! If you do not give a reasonable and fast update/explination, rabid squirrels will find you and eat your computer!!! But on a different note, I love how Rane and Dan have fixed things up with Uri and are now becoming a couple. Rane especially deserves it. Will you maybe do a side story on them? Just a thought *hint, hint*. But not before you find what the freak is wrong with Shawn. Hurry! Please! *Begs!*

How could I ever forget about this story, I stalk it religiously! So deleriously happy to get an update, I've been going through a rough patch and this brightens up my bad day. Thank you

So glad you did an update.. I understand how a story can take over you life.. But the main thing is your not giving up!! Thank you...

OMFG!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU. You just totally broke my heart. How could you let Shawn do that...well really MAKE him do it...he has to be drunk or high right? It sooo doesn't excuse it but I don't wanna hate him. I knew he wasn't a brother but a cousin cos of the photo of Uri's aunt in an earlier chap, so has he always known or is this a recent discovery and has added to Shawns horrifying behavior. Please I need an excuse to still like Shawn. I am glad though that Dan and Rane will be getting together/are together now and that they both and Uri are friends again. YOU'RE SO EVIL...see that e-V-il not e-B-il thats how heartbroken I am with this chapter. Only three to go...or was this the third and theres only two to go. Can't wait to see if you SOMEHOW unbreak my heart with the next chapter...I know it doesnt sound like it but I did LOVE the chapter. Hopefully we wont have to wait soooooo very long for the next chapter. (subtle hint) (lol)

Please update soon! I can't live in suspense! I need to know what happens between Uri and Shawn! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry! More! More! More! *lol* I loved the chapter, can't wait for more.

Can't believe Uri and Shawn aren't brothers but cousins. Will we find out who is living with their real mom/dad in the next chap?

Chapter 39 "Overdue Matters"

OMG!!!!! Teeta! What a chapter!!! Fantastic!!
Fantastic and funny... and horrific!!!
Wow!!! Loved his dad!!! More Dad!!!!

Glad about the mended relationships!! Missed all the
sniggering and humour!!! Very evil cliffy!!!! But now
I've got to know what happens!!! HA!!
Loved the almost broken nose!!!

Thanks!
R