rate_review Reviews

I really like your story, and your writing style, but don’t threaten to stop writing if you don’t get reviews, after all you did get reviews for last chapters. It’s not nice toward your readers who do review and some reviewers tend to get mad about it. I know that of all the hits your story gets there’s only a fraction of people who actually do leave a review, but that’s the same for all of us writers. You’re story is good, so you really don’t need to beg.
Another remark, (I swear I don’t want to sound bitchy) if there’s going to be more involvement with girls perhaps you should add M/F to the summary, after all you did spend an entire chapter on hitting on girls. Just a suggestion. Anyway don’t blow my head off, I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I like Uri and therefore I like that the story is from his point of view. He appears to be so mature and at the same time so innocent, the opposite of his brother. The plot is well written with a good amount of humour and develops in a realistical way. I´m also curious about Shawn who seems to hide something.

I'll be blatantly honest with you. When I first saw this story come up I went straight past it, thinking that it wasn't really to my taste. I thought it wouldn't be any good.

The simple fact is that so many stories are coming up on this site with badly spelt words, poor grammar and half-arsed plots that aren't gripping on any level whatsoever (it seems on behalf of the author in question as well as myself). And not just in this category.

How wrong I was with this particular story.

It is gripping on so many levels and 'makes the reader want to read on' (something my English Languauge teacher strictly forbade in textual analysis but it fits here I think).

Update soon. Thank you for actually taking time with your story. Authors like you are becoming a rarity.

darkangel1210

Wow ... yeah, total in-closet gay-ness xDDD And awww about the bully part.

It's good. I like it. I always like incest. This story funny too. No one think that the naughty older brother love his lovely younger brother. Poor Shawn. It must be hard. Trying to hide his feeling too Neeeee. We'll see how long it can take. Hoping their parents not to come in the perfect moment. GREat Story Great Author Great Time See You

*grins from ear to ear* You really did a good job describing Uri's inner torment, and of course nothing creates a bond between brothers like puking their lungs out together... lol. Loved that part. I hope you can update soon ^^

Aww, poor guy - but his problems are only starting, hm? xP

It's soooooooo good!! I love it. You. Are. Wonderfull.

HEEEEEEEE! So the little brother Does have something to his older one. I think Uri-chan loves his brother. It's just that he doesn't like the thought and won't take it. So The Next is the school story. Maybe it's time for sexy Mary to show up and a little jealous brother. Sorry. But make it like what you like. Whatever you mede I'll always review and read it cause I love your story. Gambatte

Cute so far