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Hi to everybody who took their time to review. I know I shouldn't be doing this (I mean reviewing my own story) but I think I need to respond to you. So on with my talk:

Sekre: you're my first reviewer, so THANK YOU very much. And I do appreciate the info you sent me. You're the best!

boring_neko19:I'm glad you had great time reading the story. As for your suggestion to write a chapter fro, Shawn's point of view, I don't think I could do it. You know he is different from Uri, their characters are not the same and I am tuned to Uri's. If I tried to write from Shawn's point of view, it just wouldn't be real. Although I sometimes feel tempted to do it, but I know I won't do it. But if you are curious what he thinks or feels, just watch for Uri's observations, they should reveal some things about his brother :")

Yblue: I'm so glad you liked the part about puking, it was my favorite so far. You suggested warning readers about possible M/F - but I don't think it will be necessary. And I'm sorry you felt as if I was blowing YOUR head off - I wasn't.

kanjil: how did you know?!

darkangel1210: I'm glad I didn't disappoint you when you decided to give my story a try - but you really made me blush when I was reading your review. The only thing going on in my head was a thought "Is she/he really talking about me?" I feel very flattered! Hope the other parts will meet your (and other people's) expectations.

archie187: glad you liked it. And thanks for the correction (blushes with shame)- I shouldn't have made such a stupid mistake!
kolgrim: once again I'm happy I didn't disappoint you. I'm trying hard to keep it realistic because I have enough of the stories where incest sex is perceived as easy. I have always wondered what a real person would feel if he fell in love with his brother - so I decided to write about it.

Jaklyn Toki, Sarah and Kat: : once again my deepest thanks to all three of you for the info. I hope you won't have to wait long for next chapters.

So yeah, I think that's all. Hope I will have another occasion to 'talk' to you again in the future.

See you all!

Well, new chapter! i like you. It's a great story like usual. keeep it up. Always waiting your update. Nee, I wonder if shawn change because of his love to his brother? It will be really kind of you if you make some chapter with shawn POV. EMmm, it just a suggest then.

Well, at the high school I went to we had a max of 8 classes, 4 a day that switched off everyday (1-4 one day 5-8 the next) and lasted 90 minutes, and we also had 1 or 2 off ohours where there was no class.
As for prom, both juniors and seniors can go, and underclassmen are allowed by invitation only.
and football players were the only people that were really considered jocks

Can't wait to read more!

Poor Uri is in really deep trouble. Although his reactions and fears are absolutely human and serious it´s also a bit amusing how he plans to solve his problem. Please update soon!

At first I passed this by, but I'm glad I decided to give it a try. It's very good! and I think that the main characters inner struckle is very realistic. Hope you get a chance to update soon :)

Proms: a Big dance for Upperclassmen (aka seniors). It's like celebrating their graduation with lots of dresses! The tickets must be bought at school and such. There's usually a theme like Hollywood or Under the Sea.

Classes: My highschool classes were about 40 minutes long. I think it varies with the school and area.

Hpoe that helps some!

Loved this chapter too ^^ I can't wait to read what happens next. I have the feeling Shawn has his own suspicions about what's going on and maybe he 's right? Can't help you with the USA stuff but I'm sure many people here can. Anyway, I hope you'll be able to update soon ^^

Aww, poor Shawny - the tables have turned =3


I sent you those question replies just now, by the way :)

Hey, I like your writing style. I can't wait till your next chapter. I don't usually review, but being from America and all I felt the obligation to answer your questions.

Proms are an end of the year dance for seniors. Younger students can only come if invited by a senior. They are very formal and couples usually go out with a group to dinner before it.

Jocks at my school are the ones who play either football or soccer. It depends on what sport is most well known at the school. Traditionaly it is football.

First off, no one calls them lessons here. We have 6 classes a day and they last about an hour. They aren't optional. A few seniors don't have a 6th period because they have a job to get to, but there isn't many.

Hope I was of help. Contact me if you have more questions. ^^ laterz

This was good. i like it. It cracked me up no end. Oh by the way the 'eatable' should be edible.