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Yeah, feelings are being completely denied x.x I wonder how Uri is going to do this whole girlfriend thing when he doesn't even like her like that.

Hi *waves* :D
I like this fic so much! Uri is adorable!! I can't wait until you update, the story has me hooked already. I love the brothers, poor babies :P Anyway, your fic is great, update soon :)

i really, really, really like this story. a lot XD
i just wish uri would stop being a jerk and in denial. and do i hint that they might not be related?? eee... i cant wait until the next chapter. i usually dont read original stories EVER, but i just couldnt not read this one. lol. UPDATE SOON!

Like your story so far. I like how he is having an internal struggle with his attraction to his brother. Not all writers do that... a lot just have him basically love his brother/whatever without a problem. This is good. I could kind of tell english wasn't your first language, no offence. ((it was because of some of the phrases you use)) But your english is very good.

Proms... well, it depends on the high school. Proms usually happen near the end of the year, in march or april. My proms were around then. Usually only Juniors and Seniors can go (but a junior or senior can invite a sophmore.) I don't know about freshmen, though. Like I said, it depends on the school. And the junior/senior can invite someone from another school, or someone that's not in school, as long as they're not past 21 years of age, or too young. There's dancing, music, a photographer, food, drinks, flowers, decorations, a theme. A prom king and queen (both are seniors), the princess and prince (are juniors I think) They also have the seniors do a walk of something something. I really didn't pay much attention...I was too busy with my friends and I never paid any attention to the prom king/queen or whatever. lol This is basically all I know. There's probably someone who knows more. Remember though, different schools do different things with proms, but proms are usually always taking place at the end of the year...

Jocks...refer to atheletic people period.

School schedule...depends on what grade you're in and what kind of school. When I was a senior last year, I had four classes, about 55 minutes long each. Some schools have "block" schedules. Block schedules are usually about 4 classes a day, each class maybe 1 1/2 hours-2 hours. Some just have the schedules where there's about 6- 8 classes, usually each around 50 minutes. Basically, depends on the school. Some classes are required, which are core classes (Math, english, history, etc) while there are optional classes which you would call "electives". You HAVE to have some electives, but you get to choose WHAT kind of electives you want, usually. For example, art, choir, band, etc.

Hope I've been a little helpful. ^^

You're story is getting better and better, now that more mystery is floating around. Especially with Uri's mom's intense, suspicious reaction to his joking. Shawn's reaction is very understandable. Uri is basically his best friend and anyone can tell he cares for his brother A LOT. If its more than brotherly love...I don't know, but there's the possibility of it. Uri hurt him because he shut Shawn out, (which sounds like he's never shut shawn out before), so Shawn is hurting a lot and probably thinks Uri doesn't want to have anything to do with him anymore. So, his actions in the last chapter are not very surprising or odd. Although, the crying is only odd because Uri says he's never seen Shawn cry before, so that in itself supports my theory that Shawn is hurting very much. Can't wait for more! ^^

P.s. In America, the woman or man in charge is called a "Principal", not "Headmaster". Headmaster/Headmistress is more of a...british term.

The description of how guilt and dread drive Uri to take measures to get rid of his unwanted feelings, regardless who gets hurt in the process, is very believable. I´m so sorry for Shawn. Great chapter as always.

Good chapter, glad you updated :)That is some fucked up situation that they're dealing with, can't even imagine what I would do in a situation like that and I think that I don't even want to start imagining it, lol.

Hm... wonder if there's some family secret there, considering the mothers reaction...interesting...

Well anyway, I'll wait eagerly what you come up with this next.

Hmph, I don't think he's gonna get very far in his little plan of his - There's no way he can just be a 'stranger' to Shawn, which is obvious by the way he was so quick to confort him. -giggles- Just give into the dark side xP

Ah, poor Christian boy. I think it’s pretty dumb and inconsiderate to try date someone you’re not attracted to just to be considered ‘normal’. Actually, it makes him a bit of an asshole, doesn’t it? I guess even Uri realises that, but he’s pretty persistent in fooling himself. It’s kind of like the ‘must be normal, must get married to woman’- phase some gay men go through. It will just make things more complicated and messed up. Of course this situation is a little different because of the incest issue. Still what Uri is doing’s definitely not the way to go. I hope he’ll realize that soon.

I wonder what that strange reaction of Uri’s mother was about. To be honest I’d be a bit sad if it turned out they weren’t real brothers. Not that I’m that turned on by incest. (no, honest! lol) But it would mean there’s a lot of secrets in the family, the dad not really being their dad and shit, and I like them to be a more or less ‘normal’ family, you knew. Because that’s just… cuter.

Anyway, still love your story. Can’t wait to read what’s next. Oh and thanks for reviewing my story. I'm a sucker for reviews too. Aren't we all? ^_~

you uh... seem to be mixing up iorny and sarcasm...