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Chapter 2 - I'm back! To read the rest of course. Another really cute chapter. I guess, overall, your story is just absolutely adorable. And I've read a lot of incest stories but none of them are as realistic as this. So that's pretty cool. Time to read the rest!

Chapter 3 - Aww. Poor Uri. So clueless. I'm patiently waiting the return of Shawn.

Chapter 4 - Aww. I love Uri so much. He's so, so cute. I keep saying that. Like every single chapter. I just can't help it, though. Your story IS so cute.

Chapter 5 - That's kinda strange. That their Mom would act like that. Hmm.. maybe one of them's adopted! That would be SO perfect. Then they can fuck like bunnies.

The conversation with Shawn was so cute it almost killed me. It seems Uri’s inner torment has taken another turn, but he still has no clue. He’s so clueless it starts to get funny. This one quote, ‘How many surprises does my brother hide from me?’ cracked me up so much, all double meanings included. Okay I may be evil. I do feel sorry for Uri though. He is indeed the emperor of obliviousness.

Chapter 6 - Poor Nancy. She seems nice enough but when Uri finally admits his SEXUAL love for Shawn she's going to be crushed. Oh well. Who cares? I'll be happy as long as Uri and Shawn get together. :D

Chapter 7 - Shawn's such a bastard. I love him. And Uri's so innocent, cute, and adorable. They're just the perfect couple. I can hardly wait for your next chapter!

OMG... Uri is dense... DENSE... Argh... >_< The hints... hints!

Shawn likes him. I know he does. That's why he tells Uri that he can't cook to get Uri to cook for him. Like a good little wife. Haha. ;) And the one Shawn loves has to be Uri. Right? I think Shawn purposely did not wake Uri up until 8:15. I think he made Uri lunch and woke him up when it was too late for him to catch the bus. I think he wanted to have Uri ride with him on the motorcycle and I think Shawn sped a whole bunch because he wanted Uri to grab on to him tightly. Or this could be my wishful thinking.

As much as I like how the story is developing, do you mind telling me when SOMETHING will happen? Like a confrontation of feelings? Obvious displays of jealousy? A kiss? Anything?! The suspense is killing me.

*dies*

oh that was such a good chapter! Oh all the possibilities! I should have been to bed a long time ago and yet I find myself here *sigh* Oh but this was worth it! Maybe I can get some sleep better now, or then not...Um, you're still teasing, but I see hope! lol. Yeah I'm so freaking tired and had a rough day, can't give an okay review apparently... But please update soon =)

Yay! new chapter!!!! <3 Uri is dense >.< But oh so adorible....I love Shawn...XDXDXD Im so glad you updated, and I think Saturdays or sundays are going to become my two favorite days XD Can't wait until next week!

Sandwiches actualy sound good right now 0.0