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Wow. This is a really awesome fic. I like how realistic it is. It's really cool and now I'm addicted to it so I hope it turns out well. Sad endings make me cry.

Good chapter :D I look forward to each and every one. Uri isn't going to get into trouble with the jocks, is he? And when is he going to stop being so nieve (not that it isn't adorible ^^;;) and get a clue? 0.0 lol

Can't wait until the next chapter ^^ (btw, now I want sanwiches :X )

Yay for the chapter :) Some more tension between them, huh?

ah, another great chapter. its like taking a breath of fresh air. so cute though XD uri is so mad at shawn for the food deal. its hilarious. i loved this chapter.

-.- uri needs to eat his denial. hes not going to be able to fool himself forever. cant wait to see were this is going. love it. love it.

*cheers* more!

CHAPTER 7
Hi teeta. I was not going to read this because of description (incest is just not my cup of tea, so to speak) but I always look at number of clicks and reviews and read this because of it.

Wow, just wow. Excellent writing style and a wonderful plot. I got that feeling that the boys are Not really related which made me feel even better. Was one of them adopted? Or even both? I feel that Shawn knows more then he leads on. He is in love with Uri and this fic is just mind boggling. Very well done, you've got yourself another fan, teeta, he, he:D

Oh and, since this is the only fic you have posted, just in case I'd like to say Welcome and a good start.

Thank you for writing.

This has got to be the best broxbro love story I have ever read! It's so real! They don't just jump in bed with each other in one night, but actually progress realisticly to that point! I love it completely! Can't wait till you update!

No problem. Good stories SHOULD get detailed reviews and writers who need help, too. You know whats weird... there's a new guy at my work who has a pony tail and his name is Shaun. O_o

Uriel actually reminds me of me... how I was a few years ago. To sum it all up real quickly, I was confused at the time, too, and didn't understand why I got so jealous whenever anyone was around her, especially whenever she had a "boyfriend" or once when she tried having a "girlfriend"... and just like Uriel, I was clueless as to why. LOL. One of my gay male friends, for some reason, wanted to matchmake me with his friend (who he used to have a crush on), and so eventually, I was curious and decided to try it. I am still bi, but it took me to go out with this guy to fully realize that I loved (love) her. So... your story is kind of familar to me, but different, too. I like it. ^^ Its realistic.

I can't wait to see more, but I shall wait patiently. Shawn's behavior is interesting, especially his confession. It looks like he's trying to hint at his feelings to Uriel without actually telling it bluntly, or else Uriel never gives him the chance to. ^^ Good stuff, good stuff.

I forgot to add something. Its a good point, actually. Denial is usually more conscious than it is unconscious. In other words, you may not know exactly or directly what you feel, but you know enough to feel that it is wrong or shameful, so you do what most do... you play the denial game.

I mentioned I knew how Uriel felt, in a way. I don't think most people realize that what he's going through isn't easy and he can't just slap himself out of his inner turmoil and say, "Oh, its ok!" Its not easy and its very hard. Admitting you like the same sex is hard to do, and dealing with it is harder. Not only is Uriel having homosexual feelings for Shawn, but Shawn is his brother. In most places, what they feel is considered taboo and Uriel knows this. He doesn't want to feel this way, he just wants to be normal (even though being normal is boring; being weird is fun) and he just wants to be Shawn's buddy, not lover. Eventually (hopefully), in time, he'll come to terms with it. I think Shawn is going to be major help in helping his brother come to terms to what he feels. Sometimes, if you're told/reassured that what you feel/think is okay, then its easier to deal with it. And, if he finds out Shawn feels similar, it'll make a big difference too.

You cleverly drop hints how Shawn feels at the same time you keep Uri´s state of ignorance credible. Very well written. The titles of the chapters are also very fitting. After two revelations in a day I wonder what Uri will find out next.

I am really enjoying this story, please continue writing as fast as you can! I loveeee the plot and ideas. ^_______^

Hehe, thanks for the story!