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OHMYGOD. *dies*

That was the world's scariest cliff hanger. What the fuck is up with him? He's acting all crazy! I'm so worried now. Update soon, please! I might just die if I don't find out what happens soon.

HOLY FU--!!!

I had a suspicion they're not brothers in the earliest chapter when their mom went off asking Uri all these questions after he'd went off saying something about them possibly not being brothers, so I wasn't surprised by that revelation. I was waiting, actually, wondering when it would finally come out. I'm just slightly shocked...and possibly a little edgy...regarding the last scene. It just...doesn't feel "RIGHT" to me, in the sense of OOCness.

But, it's your story, after all, and I'm sure what's happened is happening for a reason; I still like the story nevertheless. I can tell you now, this is one heck of a story - I commend you greatly for being able to do something many yaoi authors lack, which is the ability to give their story a compelling plot, proper characterization, and actual romance. I've read a lot of yaoi fics, and it seems that most people have drilled into their heads that yaoi is simply the MalexMale version of Playboy TV or tasteless sex.

I tip my hat to you =]

xoxo,
Aesha

OMG! Found this story and could not stop reading it over the weekend. And now the ending of Chapter 39 WOW! Please Please Please finish the story.

WHAT!? Evil author, how can you stop there! WTH is wrong with Shawn??
I reread every chapter and I discovered that in, I believe it was chapter 5, Uri said something about him and Shawn not being brothers and his mother looked up alarmed. It makes sense now!
Update soon!!

think for this chapter i cant wait to see what happens in next chapter is shawn relly going to rape him and what does Uri do thinkyou

Oh! YOu evil, evil girl! You go away forever and then it you leave us like this?! When will you update next? Shawn's lost it completely! When did he learn that he was Uri's cousin, and not his brother? I kinda had a clue but wasn't sure if Shawn knew. Anyway you better update soon, Shawn's gonna feel like the biggest jerk ever when he finds out that Uri was trying to set Rane up with Dan, and when he finds out that Uri was nearly raped, especially if he goes through with raping Uri. Please don't keep me on the edge for long.

UGH! You just killed me with that ending! A great chapter as usual, but damn... I haven't been this surprised in quite a while, even though I'd left that possibility open, that they actually weren't brothers. But still, think this is one of the words cliffhangers I've read ;_; Know real life is demanding, but you got a fan here who will probably check for updates every other day, hope that encurrages you!
Can't believe I'm saying it, but almost begging for the final chapter to come out, just to know how it ends. Don't want it to end though!
Hell~~

This chapter was SO intense.

I cannot believe you left us hanging at the end!
I mean, his cousin!? WHAT!? HOW CRUEL! I'm in denial about the whole thing.
Shawn can't be his cousin. That just... no. Absolutely not. It doesn't makes sense.
And besides, I love Shawn! Please don't tell me he's lost his marbles and become a right nutter!

On a lighter note, I'm really pleased with the whole
Dan/Rane pairing. Good for Dan! He's been angry for too long...

Well, I can't wait for the next installment!

- Jade

Noooo! You can't stop like that! You are EVIL! ;_;

oh my god! you can't leave it there! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! don't let shawn do this!!
ASOTA