rate_review Reviews

Oh such a good story, I love the insight to Uri's thoughts, I don't really know how a brother would feel falling for his sibling, but I think u've managed to capture it perfectly.

I can't wait til the next update!

Hey, great story. I know I should review the stories I really love, but I just never end up doing it but today I thought...I really really like this story, so I'm gonna review it. I love all the angst that Uri is going through, it makes the story all the more realistic. To me, blood doesn't matter, you love a soul, then you love a soul, nothing you can do about it. Anyways, update soon. Just a note of confidence for you, I can assure you, that there are many readers out there that love your story but are too lazy to review (like myself), so if a lack of reviews sometimes disheartens you, don't think that only that amount of people really like your story. There are many more, I'm sure. *smiles* Oh, and your story is the only story I can stand that is written as it happens, without using "past" tense words.

Your vivid and insightful writing makes it really easy despite the extraordinary circumstances to sympathize with Uri as well as Shawn, although we only see him through Uri's eyes, like for example why he stops teasing Uri about Nancy and acts differently when he learns more about Uri's opinion of her. I'm glad that my comment came across as the praise it was meant to be (I have a bit difficulty in formulating reviews since it's the only time I write in English). Awesome story!

Sidenote: Correct me if I’m wrong, English is not my native language, but aren’t supper and dinner synonyms? One being the British word the other American, both meaning the evening meal? It’s just what I thought, could be completely off…

Anyway I like Nancy. She definitely deserves a better boyfriend then Uri, I mean… a guy who’s actually in love with her, and for better reasons. I have nothing against Uri, he ‘s adorable. I love it when his thoughts wander off to his cute fantasies about Shawn. Makes me all giggly^^ Though honestly, the person I feel most sorry for in this story is Shawn. He’s so obviously hurting and Uri doesn’t see it. Wonder where it will all lead to. I suppose you can guess what I would like XD

You really do make your characters so believable in my opinion, which is very good. Hm, not much to say, just that I really liked this chapter like the ones before and hope I get to read you soon :)

ah...
i think im in love. seriously. this is a amazing story.
im so happy that uri is finally [even if its just a little] starting to warm up to the idea. at least hes not physically ill every time he thinks of his brother that way.

its going slow, but i really dont think id want it any other way. its perfect. and i love having casual updates. thanks for writing this :3 its one of the few things i look forward to.

dont ever stop, please. and im sure im not the only one who thinks that either. i would absolutely die if i couldnt finish reading this.

again - amazing. beautiful. wonder.

thank you :D

Chapter 8 - Oh, I am SO happy. I'm giggling. Madly. He's falling for Shawn~~~! So, so happy. Omg. Uri is just so ADORABLE. Seriously. Sinfully adorable. I really wish that he got in bed with Shawn, though. Oh well.

CHAPTER 8
Hi, teeta , I am humbled by the fact that you hoped to get my review. Thank you. I do review a lot but only the stories that have Something going and Special in some way. I don't think that you will disappoint your readers, 8 solid chapters speaks for itself:-D

I wonder if this is your first fic ever or not. Amazing, if it is. You should definetely write more (and post it here, ha!). Do you post on other archives or groups etc?

Overall I like the balance between Uri's thoughts and real life as well as his interactions with Shawn. Very relistic and natural flow. It does reads like a slice of real life. Will read this for sure but can't promise reviews on every chapter as RL is so busy.

Good job, teeta.

patiently waiting for next update. poor shawn. having to hear about nancy.
love your story so far. kudos

I'm pretty close to in love with thise story. It makes me so happy you're still writing it (SOME people stop.).

Its so slow moving and kinda like a tease. I want Uri to tell his brother, yet I dont. o.o How fucking confusing is that?!

I'll tell you! Very.

Please update soon and make me and everyone else happy =DDDD

-Freaky Emi