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hahahah, I had a feeling dan liked her when he was all embarrassed while he was talking to Uri. Poor guy, there went his 'amazing' plan. Oh, and I wonder about the red head on the bus...perhaps hes a jock or something? I hope so...If Uri befriends a jock maybe he won't get freaked out by them.

"I fear what can happen next. With my luck, that will definitely be something unthinkable."

oh, please please please let it be something unthinkable [and the good kind too XD]. i loved this chapter! i had to laugh when Shawn just sat there after he woke up. I bet he has the same thoughts Uri does when he sees him in a towel.

and thank you for the reply to my review. i hope nothing serious comes up cause i love this story too much and youre an amazing authoress. im looking forward to any more works of yours if you ever decide to start something new.

*dances*

this made my night, and now i wait for the next update!!

Lol poor Uri, his life is so spiraling out of control, nothing seems to be working out for him.. and LOL Shaun, he must be so confused abt the way Uri's acting... Gosh I want to see them together again... lol. And that dude Uri met on the bus (sorry Im so not good with names) seems like such an interesting guy... it wouldnt surprise me if he was a jock himself... lol

Such a great update!! Can't wait til next Wednesday.

And Merry Christmas!!

Okay so I actually couldn't concentrate to the tv show that I was watching because I knew that this had been updated. So um, yes this is how good your story is in my opinion. And I was kind of glad that Nancy has a crush on his friend, so that maybe something can soon be happening between Uri and Shawn, something um, um slashy and hot... and yeah... Alright, I'm just going to wait patiently for the next weeks(?) update. =)

you're a great writer. the whole time i'm wishing it would never end. update more often:)
great chapter. nancy wasn't for him:)

Chapter 9 - OH MY GOD! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER FOREVVVERRR! I keep checking back over and over and over. I'm like... "Have I read this chapter?" and I ALWAYS HAVE! Goddd. No, but, I'm so happy with this chapter. I LOOVEEEE it. I KNEW he was going to walk in on Shawn jackin' off. I'm sad that he didn't open the door, though. But the moans will suffice. AND WHY THE HELL DIDN'T HE TAKE HIS CLOTHES OFF INFRONT OF SHAWN? Goddamnit. And ooo. A possible love intrest. This Rane thing. I'm guessing he's a jock since he was defending the jockyness. Hmm... Shawn's gonna be jealloussssss. I can't wait! I also knew that Dan liked Nancy. WAY before this chapter. But you kinda confused me IN this chapter when he was asking him who he likes and Dan got all blushy and schoolgirlish so I thought he liked Nate. Anyways, Happy Chanukkah, Merry Christmas, Hannukkah and Kwanza. <3

Oh my God! I mean URI not Nate. Oh, I'm so sorry. God. That's never happened before.

XD YES! SANDWICH!!!! (that actualy does sound good right now.....*runs off to get one*)

Ohhh....now things are getting complicated....and I'm guessing the red-head was a jock? and poor him...not able to get with Nancy...but....Yay! Better chances for Shawn ^^ :D Yay for an update, and I can't wait for the next one! *bounces excitedly*

hello, hello....
I have to ask you a big favour.....I´m currently in england as an au pair and have to use the familys pc, put the got childprotection up, which means I can´t get onto adultfanfiction.net....and read your story.....
that´s why I wanted to ask you, if you could send me the new chapters per email....if you don´t mind....I swear I just love it and won´t abuse it or claim it to be my own.....(i know thats terrible, happend to me once)....
but I just have to read on, so if you don´t mind to contact me, just mail to art_noveau@web.de and we will talk about it......
please

hypothermia? Well he should cuddle someone for warmth... let's see... who could he possibly cuddle with? hehehe
I like this story a lot, continue soon please :)