rate_review Reviews

Poor Uri is in denial xD and yay, Rane is a jock huh? No wonder why he's so tall. Well maybe the guy can keep his jocky friends from beating up Uri, since they'll probably be like 'gay guy! beat him up!'. xD

Lol good update!! Poor Poor Uri, so much happening just in the short space of one day, and LOL he is so oblivious he didn't even know that Rane was a Jock when its obviously common knowledge. I wonder what Rane wants befriending him. And Yay!! Shawns in the next chapter!! can't wait!!

Merry Christmas!!

Chapter 10 - Eee! I'm SO happy! You updated WAYYY before Wednesday. Awesome. Ahah. The truth comes out. His hair sounds really sexy. I bet he wants to fuck poor Uri. Oh well. I hope he lets him down nicely. Oh and Merry Christmas once again!

Merry christmas! And I like your story a lot *grin* Thanx!

*Nods head with a wide smile* Thank you! Oh and this update is....awesome! XD I really love the way you make everything flow so perfectly together. I get goosebumps when I read this story because I dont know what's going to happen next and I'm scared for poor little Uri. The poor kid has so many problems...i do hope Shawn will take them all away *winks suggestively*! ;) I also like the fact that you answer your reviewers in your A/N. Cute and resorceful. ^_^ I am patiently awaiting your next update and can't wait until Shawn shows his delicious self once again! *kisses and hops away*

It's like 5am and here I was reading your story, because I couldn't get anymore sleep which I'm sure that I'll curse later this night while celebrating Christmas up late with my family, *sigh* oh well...

But enough about me, lets talk about your story. I think this was my favorite chapter so far. Hehe, poor Uri, I wonder what will become of his relationship with Rane? Darn I can't seem to be controlling myself, hehe. Well at least I made a promise to myself that I'll stop bugging you about bringing the slashy stuff on, lol. It will come if it comes and I can live without it... I can, I really can. yep, that's right. So no brotherly action coming up soon (it does feel so disturbed writing this and realizing that actually do want to see that, I'm so naughty *slaps herself*) So, where was I? Um, oh right; I love this story, I do :) and sorry about the silliness of this review I blame the fact that I didn't get enough sleep and, and... well lets leave it to that. I bugger off now.
Merry Christmas! *hugs*

A very Merry Christmas to you, too. I loved the chapter. Uri's dilemma increases more and more. Despite your comment in chapter 7 the turn with Nancy and Dan totally surprised me. All the clues were there and looking back, like Uri does, make perfect sense. It was funny how Uri refused Allie although I think now he should be a bit afraid of her. Rane seems to be an interesting person. So I'm very curious to read how things will develop (maybe one more chapter this year?). You are very welcome and thank you for your kind comment but I could never write a story.

Lol, so much for the master plan of dating Nancy! Serves him right. Like I said before, she deserves someone who actually likes her, like Dan. Well done ^^ Now Uri can finally turn his gaze to his brother who was jerking of after staring at his naked ass. Dare I say Muhahahaha. Ahem, okay it’s pretty obvious Uri has no idea of what’s going on in Shawn’s head. I really do wonder when it’s going to dawn on him that HE is the person on Shawn’s mind, and more importantly how he’s going to react. Even if Uri finds out his incestuous thoughts are mutual, he’ll still think it’s wrong… right?

What’s up with that guy Rane? Why is he interested in Uri? Is he a jock? Is he gay? (or both, that would be splendid lol) Are we going to see more of him? I liked him for some reason. Maybe because of the things he said, maybe because you left some mystery about him. Though, I have a thing for red hair so maybe it’s just that…

Anyways, good chapter, as usual. A Merry Christmas to you too!

i felt punk'd during this chapter b/c when dan was acting all weird i thought, "i figured it out! he likes uri! oh my god!" but no! that was such a shock, and then i remembered his odd behavior when uri talked about nancy and it instantly clicked. so you fooled me, bravo :) still loving this story more and more every chapter!

wow. i really like this story. ^_^
the grammar is awkward at times, as is the incredibly blunt dialogue, but the characters & plot are really great! i can't wait for Uri to finally give in & just wank to thoughts of his brother....& for Shawn to walk in on him of course. ^_~
& thanks for letting us know when u'll post the next chapter!! ^_^