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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really good :-) i like rayne he seems cool
and im kinda gettin the impression he might like the younger brother dude(forgot the name sorry) lol. great story , cant wait to read the next chappy!
and im kinda gettin the impression he might like the younger brother dude(forgot the name sorry) lol. great story , cant wait to read the next chappy!
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again Uri proved his obliviousness and has new problems to solve. It's a goog thing there are exact times. Otherwise I could forget that only a few days have passed as the plot is so eventful. Also because of that the suspense never ceases. I like that Rane doesn't appear like the stereotype jock. Great chapter as usual and I can't wait to read what happens next.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I like the story so far. You proceed rather slow but that is okay. And you (or better: Uri) seem to somewhat hate "jocks" - is it really that bad with the whole social hierarchy at American high schools (I suppose the story takes place in the US?)? Oh and is Uri pregnant? The sheer amount of barfing incidents could rival any bulemic person ;-)
Oh and did you, by any chance, named the main character after a character from Quake III? Guess not, but you never know.
Merry Christmas
Nathaniel
I like the story so far. You proceed rather slow but that is okay. And you (or better: Uri) seem to somewhat hate "jocks" - is it really that bad with the whole social hierarchy at American high schools (I suppose the story takes place in the US?)? Oh and is Uri pregnant? The sheer amount of barfing incidents could rival any bulemic person ;-)
Oh and did you, by any chance, named the main character after a character from Quake III? Guess not, but you never know.
Merry Christmas
Nathaniel
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe XD you updated!!!
this chapter was a little slower, but nessesary. poor uri, thinking that he will become a victim of bullying again because of allie's stupid rumors. the funny thing is that girls really do stuff like that. same exact thing happened at my high school - but no one cared as much.
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uri is getting phyically sick again. man - and i thought he was making a little progress. i hope this rane guy helps him out a little. he seems really nice XD
well, again, this made my day!! cannot wait until you update again.
happy holidays!!
this chapter was a little slower, but nessesary. poor uri, thinking that he will become a victim of bullying again because of allie's stupid rumors. the funny thing is that girls really do stuff like that. same exact thing happened at my high school - but no one cared as much.
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uri is getting phyically sick again. man - and i thought he was making a little progress. i hope this rane guy helps him out a little. he seems really nice XD
well, again, this made my day!! cannot wait until you update again.
happy holidays!!
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think Shawn should pounce on him tonight. ^_^ lol
his whining & denial is getting old...or rather the fact that he's getting AWAY with the denial is getting old. ^_~
his whining & denial is getting old...or rather the fact that he's getting AWAY with the denial is getting old. ^_~
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i take it back, scratch Shawn pouncing on him.
RANE should pounce on him!! *cackles & clapping evilly*
RANE should pounce on him!! *cackles & clapping evilly*
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go manipulative inquisitor jock Rane! I wonder if he will protect his new scrawny friend, or be his next nightmare. (that could be either a good or a bad nightmare lol) Uri should have brought lunch instead of ordering cafeteria fries (ew) no wonder he puked. The people in that school are really backward about being gay I must say. I guess this only amplifies the trouble Uri’s in because of the new rumors…
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome as always. waiting patiently for chapy 10003:)
lol well it would only be cool if you posted like 10 chapys a day lol
rubs the lamp. i wish for more updates from teeta
genie grants wish
teeta is forced to write instead of sleep
i feel bad for her
hmmm teeta sleep vs. more updates hmm
its a good thing i'm evil:)
mean allie!
lol well it would only be cool if you posted like 10 chapys a day lol
rubs the lamp. i wish for more updates from teeta
genie grants wish
teeta is forced to write instead of sleep
i feel bad for her
hmmm teeta sleep vs. more updates hmm
its a good thing i'm evil:)
mean allie!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How come I haven't seen this one before? Anyways, my god you are a very gifted writer....makes my writing look like childs play. *scoffs at self* I do love this stroy and if you dont mind, I am going to finish the nine chapters so I'll review again on the ninth chapter...though i would like ot review for all, I would think that you might get irritated if I did that XD Delicious so far!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By George! That was an incredible story! Oh you have to update soon, I can not get enough of it! The way you discribe things is like a mastery of well thought of scenes, while mine are jummbles of words that fall from my mind like mistaken thoughts! *bonks self on the head* I love this story! It is my new favorite! Oh, I do hope that Shawn and Uri can set thier feelings straight. XD YOUR FAN: Silas