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Mmm, pasta ... now I want to go make some (translation:make little brother cook)...my talent for cooking is on par with Shawn - I'm too lazy, impatient, and easily distracted for cooking. Hahaha, and so the school thinks hes gay...that would suck, but maybe he could better deal with his 'gayness' this way? I dunno how much longer he could be in denial, but then again, some people are in denial their whole lives. I think he would feel better if he told Shawn (not about the incest part of course ^^). Its not like he can keep hiding hes okay forever now.

Chapter 11 - Yay! Chapter 11! Aww. Poor Shawn hurt his weetle feengur. I really wanted Uri to kiss it. God. If not because Shawn is just so hot and sexy, payback for kissing him on the cheek but it is really an award to Shawn if you think about it. I laughed pretty hard when Shawn moaned over the smell and Uri started choking. Classic Not Supposed To moment. :D Anywayssss, Happy New Year!

awwww, i just adored this chapter. shawn is being so sweet and i loved his reaction to the band-aid XD its priceless. i feel really bad for uri though. the whole school seems to have turned against him :( hope they think of something to help [although he shouldnt deny his feelings XD]

im happy uri and shawn are started to hang out again, even if it still makes uri uncomfortable. hopefully he starts to be more accpeting of his feelings soon.

and shawn kissed him!!
*squee*

its too cute. i loved this chapter and, as always, cant wait for more!!

CHAPTER 11
This is so romantic. Shawn just had to kiss him! I bet, Uri looked like a sleeping angel. And then he had to pretend that that kiss was a joke. Poor dude. I mean, he can't even control himself anymore, can't even chop veggies without cutting himself. And Uri is stil so oblivious.

I like a way you describe all school dynamic with all the groups and influences. And how vicious those girls can be, spreading false rumours because of being rejected. Very realistic. I wonder what Uri is going to do about this. Sure, the rumour is true, but only Uri knows that right now. Hope that jocks won't come after him or something. At least he made one jock friend-that was so funny, by the way.

Lovely story, teeta

Thank you:)

HAPPY NEW YEAR

I am in love with this story. Uri's emotions seem very real... I'm rooting for him. I can't wait until the next update and I'm on the edge of my seat. You've inspired me to join AFF and for that, I say thank you. :3 I'll be here next week!

teeta my huggles. i'm sick. this is the first time i've been out of bed since i talked to you the last time. i hate being sick. i hope to be somewhat better by tomorrow night. you will get another chapy monday. the germs in my head aren't letting me stay awake *yawns while writing this*.

mr. niven? (is this a name?) just curious. i hate teachers that pick on people that are daydreaming and or sleeping (lol i used to do both).

it would be easier to convince everyone that ally-sp lol girl was a hooker than to convince everyone that he isnt gay. cough u didnt hear that.

hmm... just a sidenote: does this kid ever masterbate? lol

aw he got a kissy:) soooo cute. ok.. one thing that threw me was what are they making? i dont think i've eaten anything like it. recipe please? lol cause i wanna try it. oh ya and most cooking shows say not to put oil in the water just salt because then it doesnt allow the noodles to absorb any of the flavor of the sauce (i watcha lot of cooking shows) but secretly i dont like spegetti noodles anyways so what kind were they using again?

i hate papercuts...
they are evil.
knife cuts are only slightly less evil

"yes, i do want you to kiss it better" shawn says to his little bro and then proceeds to ravage him. (lol this part happens in my head) sorry dirty mind.





mickey mouse is te uber.

shawn moaning even makes me hot. *fans self*





ok last comment. where is their tv?


..... lol either comp. or tv. i need one or other.
preferably both with cable.


huggles and wub. your adoring fan ero:)
omg omg omg u soooo cant steal my stalker:( thats not fair.
o2xquisite was mine first:(

dam i love this story so far plz continue

OMG YOUR DRIVING ME NUTZO!!!!!! everyday i go to your page to see if youve updated and i end up by running away crying!! WHAT KIND OF MONSTER ARE YOU?!?!?!?!? *calms down* yea, id just like it if you update. plz! your an amazing writer. you still havent updated since i started writing this. *turns evil* if you don't update now, im gonna hurt you!!! *pulls out a spork* *insane* IF YOU DON'T UPDATE MISSY, YOUR GONNA BE IN A LOT OF TROUBLE! FIRST IM GONNA CHASE YOU AROUND WITH MY SPORK AND THEN WE'LL PLAY HIDE AND SEEK (as long as i'm hiding first ^_^) AND WE'LL CLIMB A TREE AND EAT YOGURT. SOUND FUN? IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO!!!!!!!! and if you don't update, then im going to come back every day like some phsyco and REVIEW you EVERY TIME! well, i like your writing! have a nice day! *rides off on a camel*

Here's the author again ... I know I shouldn't do this but I need to respond to you, o2xquisite ... I'm glad you like the story but I'm not afraid of the spork so you won't threaten me with one, hehe. As to the update ... I know I was supposed to update today BUT I updated on Saturday instead so the next update is like ... on Saturday? That's for sure ^_^ and do review, please, I love reviews (even if they come from a personal stalker, lol)!

0.0 sorry ti took me so long to read this >.< Can you say scatterbrained this week, lol. Kind of like Uri...speaking of which, I keep scrapping the pics....I WILL GET IT DONE THOUGH!!!!

ok, now that I've said that, wonderful chapter! As usual! ^^ (you're welcome for the hair thing....red heads are hot I actualy squeed when I saw that you made a red-headed character^^) You know what? *sly grin* Rane acts like he has a crush on Uri too....*is shot* yeah, i know, I can find a pairing in anything ^^;; *is shot again*

Anyhow, I REALLY can't wait to see how the next chapter goes....I really really REALLY can't! So Im definatly looking forward to this weekend XD

(....I swear your pic in on the way....this is just a mark of how disorganized I am -_-;)