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First of all, I must compliment good author on nice, long chapter.

Next, I'm not too crazy about jocks, four of them beat up a friend of mine, used a beer bottle, cuz he looks sort of feminine... He isn't even gay, but just looking it, and walking home late alone was enough to almost get him killed.

Third, don't worry about fixing your story, like someone complained, so what if they think you updated. I just check the dates to see if there's a new chapter. Isn't so hard to do. Good authors edit, the site puts them back to the top, isn't your fault. Most of us know that.

I LOVED it...the kitchen scene. Uri just hasn't a clue. Soooooo damn cute. I wanted to hug him!!

You have made him so real to me. Quite a gift. Just think what it would be like for him if his brother really would freak at the news.

I'm glad you made it mutual. I'd hate to think of him suffering with this forever.

Looking forward to more, as always,

OMG!!! I totally love this story.. I've been following it since November. It's totally obvious that the older brother is in love with Uri too... GAH!! It's moving slow!!! But you know, I'm just impatient. I really like the story and I can't wait till the smut gets rollin!

sharingan.swirl

"I must have fallen asleep quite early because I don’t remember Shawn coming to bed-this made me hot for a second. i have such dirty thoughts.

aw shawn is soooo cute. he is happy about nancy. love it!

i wanted uri to hug shawn and then rape him lol

i hate how tormented shawn is. grr

how could anyone be disgusted with shawn. hes too awesome.

oooo he's hot. mmm lol.

i bet shawn is so happy for uri to call him hot

"Should I clutch at his jacket? Or maybe grab at his hips "- no u should throw him down and rape him. lol. hehe. or lean close to him and tickle him to death. lol while doing 80 on his motorbike lol. uri and shawn die in a firey crash while making out. what a way to go. i'm weird.

15 minutes being sooo close to shawn 'hey uri wanna trade places?' lol

being gay is like the black plague or being a witch. only i think they drowned witches and burned people with the plague. ya i guess its not the same thing at all. lol making chicken pox or something.

ya.. ways to tell if your gay. if u are a guy and enjoy seeing other guys naked then you are probably gay. if you also enjoy seeing girls in the shower then u are bi. if you are a girl and u enjoy seeing girls naked in the shower then u are a lesbian. if you also enjoy seeing guys in the shower then you are bi.

and if you only enjoy seeing one person naked then you are (insert name here) sexual. lol uri is shawnsexual lol.

he gets a cheeseburger? does he like onions? what kind of milkshake. its probably chocolate. i dont like chocolate milkshakes lol. but vanilla is pretty good.

they have milkshakes at school?.... no fair!

mcguire. lol isn't he big in baseball?

i shall defend uri! lol and get those that would hurt him grr.


great chapy as always huggles and wub.

glad u liked the chapy.

lol i have a vision of u tied to a computer lol. although 99.99999999999999999999999999999 percent of my visions dont come true. lol

although there was this one time where i dreamed i was on a computer. i guess that comes true almost everyday lol.


your fan, ero

Please update soon. Very, Very soon. Like Tomorrow. This is a very intersting story.

haha, when i saw you updated i seriously squeeled out loud. poor uri :( the jocks are gunna make his life a living hell. i loved breakfast though :D uri telling shawn he was hot and him spitting coffee all over him XD and i think its adorable that shawn let him wear his jumper. i bet he liked to see his clothes on uri. guys have a thing with that - they like to see their boy/girlfriends in their clothes. and uri in an oversized jumper sounds adorable XD

cant wait for the next update
i seriously check this at least once a day

i think im addicted - its like a drug
when its over i might have to go into rehab XD

this is a good story but have you moved your story to the top enough times??

I'm still with you on this story, thanks for the updates during Christmas break. Hopefully Uri will come to his senses pretty soon and realize that he wants to be with Shawn. >.> And I agree with everyone else that this story is quite realistic; the one brother doesn't just start sucking face with the other for no exact reason.

Well keep it up, and mehbeh a little lime? Or fluff at least? Soon? Q.Q

I'd like some Shane and Uri action soon ;) thats all i ask for! I love the story. You write really well.

I have a needy cat on my lap right now, so I can't really write much, but I've got to say that I would love to see this story finished and published. I love it, and while it is not exactly community-safe, it is intriuging, and it really captrures what I believe a true teenager would feel in this situation. Also, it is completely fan-girl worthy, and the plot is simply amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter!

WOW! This is a really good story, I have never reviewed for you before but I have read your work and your are very gifted ^_^ I am new, but I do hope that my fictions can be as somewhat level with yours. Though I know that we write completely different, I would like to think that my fictions would have a small chance. ^_^ I admire your carful words and how you bring out the personalities of your characters. My fav is Uri, He is confused but I like how he trys to figure out the problem before he acts, though while I was reading I was jumping up and down in my chair yelling at him to make a move on Shawn XD. OH! I have noticed that you answer your reviewers, that is an interesting thing to do. Uhm..I am not sure if I should ask about another author while I am praising you on your wonderful work, but I do have a question to ask of you. Do you know what happened to Silas? Or JadenLeeFaye? I am a fan of thiers. I have seen Silas's name as one of your reviewers and I am curious as to why she took off her stories? I'm sorry, I shouldn't ask, But anyways, I am in love with your work and will review again once you have updated. ^_^ Until then.