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Wow! The new chapter is awesome, and I just love how it ends.

Did Shawn tell the rest of the family that he loves Uri... no, right? Did he tell them that he's gay or something? Possibly...? Hmmm?

I have waited all day and kept myself from checking in on this story. But finally I could take it no longer and decided to check. Sadly, I even dreamt of this story last night... what may happen this coming night between the two brothers. Oh my... how I wish you would update so i can find out. The suspense is literally killing me. I think in the past twenty four hours you have taken off five years of my life. Its like reading a good book when someone suddenly jerks you away from it a page from the climax. Oh and if Uri doesn't get a move on it... he might just go insane--- or I might instead. And its so sweet that his brother is in love with him... he is isn't he? Well at least thats what it seems to be, I may be completely off. Just don't tell me if I am. I'd rather live with my sick delusions that his brother is secretly lusting after him. And does his whole family know that his older brother is gay or something, is that why they reacted that way towards Uri's comment about his brother's secret girl? Or perhaps they know he lusts for his brother -drools-! Okay now I will pull myself from my sick little fantasies and beg you AGAIN to update this story. Unless of course you're using me for more reviews. Which you will get. Begging you to update. Until you do of course, then you will get another long review like this one. And then more begging you to update. Prolly about three maybe four a day... kidding. Maybe once a week. What can I say I'm a desperate girl! I really want to know what happens in that story. Perhaps the need won't be so urgent next time. Oh and I wanna commend you on sticking Dan with... uhhh... what's her name again (female character-- didn't stick with me) to get her out of the way. And Rane is really sweet and considerate to Uri-- but makes me wonder if he has an ulterior motive. Okay now I'm done rambling uselessly. this is probably the most pathetic review I've ever left. I apologize and I'll stop now......now......maybe now.......its addictive.

CotDM

Uh man that was good! um, um, I love how you descripe things I simply love the thoughts that goes through in Uri's mind. And their grandparents? Love them too, lots of loving going on here, hehe.

So the scene whit the pie and the love life guestions (God I hate it when my relatives bug me about it) the strange reactions, um, I sense something really juicy there! And they share the same bed with Shawn during the weekend? Oh this is just too good to be true! ^_^ I have to bug you with more updates now, don't I? Well, I will try to behave, I promise to try; oh but there just so much to look forward to! I can tell that the next chapter is going to be sooo good.

Thank you Teeta! *hugs*
Love:
-C-

Yoohoo for fast updates! *gulps down layer cake* thanks! Haha, Shawn just takes off his clothes and Uri mentally turns it into a strip-tease. I love your choice of words, like ‘battalion of crazy butterflies’ it makes your story so easy to picture. And I loved how you tease your audience with not telling what Uri fears so much about Silver Creek with Shawn. Somewhere halfway the chapter I started guessing though and I guessed right. A double bed. Forgive me but I dearly hope Shawn will just snap and … respond to Uri’s deepest desires. *chuckles*

They’re such a nice family. I love their parents I wish mine were like that! I’m getting a dark and uncomfortable feeling about everyone’s reaction about Shawn ‘girlfriend’ though. They can’t possibly know about Shawn’s secret desires, can they? They wouldn’t let the boys sleep in the same bed…

oh you are a TEASE!!
and here i thought uri might actually get a kiss -.-
but you know that just makes me want more XD youre good at keeping an audience's interest. the fact that they have to share a bed is awsome and i wonder what the whole thing is that happened at the table? *must have more*

oh, and dont worry about the rehab bill :P ill probably be institutionalized permanently. ill be a ward of the state XD

*waits for update*

OOh I wonder whats with the reaction to the GF question... Could it be that his parents and grandparents know something abt Shawn that Uri doesnt?

I am really looking forward to the next chapter... but poor Uri he keeps freaking out...

I love this story, I am always on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Awesome job!

Oh, that was cute.

Uri thinking he was gonna get kissed.

It feels like...he's getting more used to it...and and the pressure, that he might just be the one to kiss first!

Funny though, as much as I look forward to them finding out how they feel, I felt so bad for Uri I wished he could've stayed home. I don't know. It's the suspense, has to be...you built it up so well.

Sharing a bed??? *Smirk*

EXCELLENT chapter. I loved it. Thanks.

(hops up and down happilly) You updated early. ThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyouThankyou. This is so exciting. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Oooo Oh Teeta, you are a sexy sly fox XD I must say ^_^ I would have never dreamed of such a more perfect setting. The outdooors. Warm and a one bed for the both of them to share, in close proximity. XD I believe that interesting things are going to start happening. (shivers and holds shoulders) Just thinking about what they will be doing gives me the chills. And in the most wonderful way of course. ^_^ Hmm, I wonder what that was all about? The whole Shawn getting up and leaving the table while the rest of the family kind of cough the subject away. Perhaps they know something about Shawn that we do not? Another capturing chapter and I can not wait until your next update ....until then IndigoCurse