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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sucks to have Insomnia dude!
I use to have it! I love this story by the way.
person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can I just tell you how awesome this story is?
person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just got done reading chapter 18 and... OMG OMG OMG!!
i love this story!
person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love this story!!
person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude, are they going to do it?
person Jaden
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you left it there with such a cliffie!!!! Please please finish!!!
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No!!! This story needs to be updated!
person rossiu
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that was a dream...or something...
i wanted them to end so perfectly 0.0
Shawn wouldn't really do that would he?????

arghhh i hate plot twists right when the story is about to end. Just two chapters left? Even though I'm depressed about the plot twist, I am interested to see how you are going to end the story. Hopefully it will leave everyone with a warm and fuzzy feeling.

Anyway, this is one of my favorite stories on aff. I read all the chapters in just two nights. Can't wait for the next ones.
person Ikippiki
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AARRGH you are EVIL! How could you stop here?! What the f*** is Shawn doing!! Pleeeeeeease update!
I LOVE this story so far, the dialogues are awesome. The playfull conversations make me actually read everything instead of skipping parts like I usually tend to do with chapters this long. I would really like to be able to write as well as you do!
Can't wait to read more!!
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, dramatic chapter, I can't wait to read the next installment when it comes out.

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