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I know... I suck... but I'm reviewing now!

I love this new chapter! I cannot wait to see them snuggled together in the same bed. Shawn's reaction to them going to grandma's house was awesome... he totally wants his little brother! Naughty boy...

Looking forward to the next update!

*glomps* OMG you almost gave me a heart attack with this one..it hiought I had skipped a week of my life 0.0

So does this mean we get two chapters this week? *crosses fingers hopefuly*

I was just WAITING through out the whole chapter for you to say they had to share a bed....just WAITING for it.....

and then you said it and I went *SQUEE!!!!!*

It's great you updated so soon. I loved how the anticipation increased until my gradually developing guess was confirmed with the last sentence. And as if the fact that they have to share a bed isn't exciting enough, the mystery concerning Shawn gets more obvious than ever and more puzzling to me, because everyone of the family seems know about it except Uri. Very compelling, I only wished the chapter was even longer. Thank you.

you torture me...good chap, need more.

AAAAHHHHH!!! >.<
Shawn/Rane???!!!!! *frightened whimper* ........well, that WOULD be hot.....
AHH, what? NO!!! but Shawn loves URI!!! it's OBVIOUS!!!! >.< ...... *sigh*

i like to guess where a story's going -if i can anticipate a writer's next move i feel so proud of myself. which is why i mention my theories in my reviews...... but then if something weird like that pops up, i have to adjust. which is also fine too. *shrug* ^_^

for a while i've been suspecting Uri was adopted or something; now that u've introduced the aunt thing, i'm thinking she died in childbirth or just after or ran away or something & left her son for her sister to raise. and EVERYBODY knows this but URI. hence the awkwardness at the table when Uri tried to be clever.
the reason their mom demands uri goes this weekend is that they're planning to tell him ...& they all know about Shawn liking him......

it doesn't all fit together in my head perfectly yet, i figure u'll fix that soon enough. ^_^
i'm LOVING the insight provided by the backstory of family history and change of setting.
i can't wait for more!

Chapter 13 - OMIGAWD! I KNEW THAT WAS COMING! I KNEW IT! I was like giggling when he said he didn't want to go. Theeeyyy havvvee tooo shareeee a bedddd~~~! And now I'm giggling even harder because you promised that next chapter they'll do the nasty. The pURIfying. The shawnshank redemption. Lmfao. I don't know what I'm saying anymore. Do they know Shawn's gay or something? Or were they worried about Shawn having sex? Anyways, update soon! Or not. Just...update? Yeah. That's it. W00t! Thanks for the cookie. I'll throw a e-party for you when the sex happens. I'll bring the gigabites and you can pring the pixel faeries.

Now, I'm going to cry. How could you leave it there?!? Oh now I'm gonna have insomnia again wondering whats going to happen. Ahh!!! And I have school tomorrow! This sucks... big time. Oh well, I do hope you update soon... srry haven't figured out if there is a pattern yet. But it just keeps getting better-- your story that is, not your update times.


CotDM

OMG!!! I am shivering! I just can't wait for the next chapter. You are wonderfull Teeta. *hugs*

OMG!!!! YOU EVIL EVIL PERSON!!!!! Why must you leave me hanging like that??!!!! So does the silence surrounding Shawn's "girlfriend" mean that the parents and grandparents know he's gay? Hm... something to think on. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! BEFORE I GO CRAZY AND. . . JUST. . . POKE MYSELF IN THE EYE!!!!!!

I've been reading your story for awhile now and wanted to comment, but didn't know what to write. I'm not good with writing good reviews, sorry. ^^' Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really like your story.