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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13
oh noes not the doom.
they beat uri up and i'll kill them.
lol i used to sleep on the buss.
why is it named silver creek?
“So how was your school this week?” dad asks me casually,
(he answers : the school was fine, i believe the janitors swept it nicely, then the lawn of the school got mowed and trimmed. yes the school is doing fine this week and looking nicer than ever. lol"
lol moms are evil for real.
lol bro or not. shawn is one prime piece of male hotness.
ya shawn likes spending a whole weekend wrapped around uri as he sleeps. sooo hot
shawn stripping is hot.
don't let uri hump the vacuum.
i hate cleaning. i hate gardening. all evil
lol
i wanna be naturally starving lol
I've never had plum pie. o.o
aw no why didnt he kiss him. so not fair. he could just have said he had a bad reaction to medicine and fell against his mouth muahhaha lol.
what photos? of who? i want details
i loved this chapy.
i didnt review in time for this chapy to get a response.. i'm so sad.
oh noes not the doom.
they beat uri up and i'll kill them.
lol i used to sleep on the buss.
why is it named silver creek?
“So how was your school this week?” dad asks me casually,
(he answers : the school was fine, i believe the janitors swept it nicely, then the lawn of the school got mowed and trimmed. yes the school is doing fine this week and looking nicer than ever. lol"
lol moms are evil for real.
lol bro or not. shawn is one prime piece of male hotness.
ya shawn likes spending a whole weekend wrapped around uri as he sleeps. sooo hot
shawn stripping is hot.
don't let uri hump the vacuum.
i hate cleaning. i hate gardening. all evil
lol
i wanna be naturally starving lol
I've never had plum pie. o.o
aw no why didnt he kiss him. so not fair. he could just have said he had a bad reaction to medicine and fell against his mouth muahhaha lol.
what photos? of who? i want details
i loved this chapy.
i didnt review in time for this chapy to get a response.. i'm so sad.
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first few lines are like the dropping off of harry potter.. lol streetlight darkness. ya. sorry guess not lol. but thats what popped into my head.
uri lieing? noooooooooo what has the huggly awesomely cute boy come to?
sleep sleep little uri. dont let the monsters under the bed get you. or maybe they already have and are just tormenting u with a failed life muahhaha opps... didnt hear that.
lol them sleeping commando would be really hot.
if shawn's a perv so am i.
i just relized i am a perv. i have to go deal with this new development.
ok. i have dealt with it and joined it into my brain. i shall read on.
lol why doesnt he just come? then he would be too tired to care.
he is hurting shawn:(
aw cuddle scene thats soooo cute.
, “Did you mean what you said in the morning?”= "Did you mean what you said this morning?"
in the morning usually means the next morning.
shawn insecure? o.o... awwwwwwwwwww
mouths always get you in trouble *evil smirk*
lol bikini. overweight? ew. 75 ew..... ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
aw shawn just wants to cuddle n snuggle
never heard you shouldnt drink while eating... doesnt the liquid help fill you up and make the food go down easier preventing you from choking?
shawn made food... for uri. thats so nice of him.
eating off his plate is hot.
aw. he wants a hug?.. that is sooooo freaking cute, warm feeling cuddly. just like a kitten lol
lol at least he didnt ask for a birthday spanking like over here lol.
lol he should have let him finish. that woulda been funny.
uri moaning....
ice here please. lol lotsa ice.
aw. poor shawn.
you terrible tease. chapy 15-20 lol please.
huggles.
i'll send u chapy 9 sometime in the wee hrs of the morning.
you're a great writer.
i wish u j.k. rawling money luck
uri lieing? noooooooooo what has the huggly awesomely cute boy come to?
sleep sleep little uri. dont let the monsters under the bed get you. or maybe they already have and are just tormenting u with a failed life muahhaha opps... didnt hear that.
lol them sleeping commando would be really hot.
if shawn's a perv so am i.
i just relized i am a perv. i have to go deal with this new development.
ok. i have dealt with it and joined it into my brain. i shall read on.
lol why doesnt he just come? then he would be too tired to care.
he is hurting shawn:(
aw cuddle scene thats soooo cute.
, “Did you mean what you said in the morning?”= "Did you mean what you said this morning?"
in the morning usually means the next morning.
shawn insecure? o.o... awwwwwwwwwww
mouths always get you in trouble *evil smirk*
lol bikini. overweight? ew. 75 ew..... ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
aw shawn just wants to cuddle n snuggle
never heard you shouldnt drink while eating... doesnt the liquid help fill you up and make the food go down easier preventing you from choking?
shawn made food... for uri. thats so nice of him.
eating off his plate is hot.
aw. he wants a hug?.. that is sooooo freaking cute, warm feeling cuddly. just like a kitten lol
lol at least he didnt ask for a birthday spanking like over here lol.
lol he should have let him finish. that woulda been funny.
uri moaning....
ice here please. lol lotsa ice.
aw. poor shawn.
you terrible tease. chapy 15-20 lol please.
huggles.
i'll send u chapy 9 sometime in the wee hrs of the morning.
you're a great writer.
i wish u j.k. rawling money luck
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh...uh...
I liked your what did you call it? Bit? Whatever it was, it was so incredibly well written I couldn't read fast enough!!! I can still feel my heart racing.
Wonderful, this story, cute, angsty, funny...
Uri is just never gonna get it, he's too worried about how pervy he feels, so I guess it's up to Shawn to take, uh, matters in hand, huh?
When that finally happens, what do they do then? They can't tell anyone, they have to hide any traces of anything...or what might the family do... yup, alot more suspense, which you're so damn good at.
What a chapter, another great one...they just get better and better. Thanks and hugs.
I liked your what did you call it? Bit? Whatever it was, it was so incredibly well written I couldn't read fast enough!!! I can still feel my heart racing.
Wonderful, this story, cute, angsty, funny...
Uri is just never gonna get it, he's too worried about how pervy he feels, so I guess it's up to Shawn to take, uh, matters in hand, huh?
When that finally happens, what do they do then? They can't tell anyone, they have to hide any traces of anything...or what might the family do... yup, alot more suspense, which you're so damn good at.
What a chapter, another great one...they just get better and better. Thanks and hugs.
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yes!!!! It's getting hotter!!! Shawn totally wished for his brother for his birthday huh??? :D You had ME panting at Shawn's "wet dream" actions. And excellent length for this chapter. Made the wait worth it! I checked every day too... can't wait for the next one!
p.s. His reactions are soooooo cute! He wants his brother!!
p.s. His reactions are soooooo cute! He wants his brother!!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that sorta sucks. I had to get an account just to review. Oh well. Anyways, YES! The Shawnshank Redemption! LOL! I just LOVE that. Shawnshank. Way too sexy. I bet Shawn took the pajamas out of the duffle on purpose.
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how nice to have a whole wonderful chapter dedicated to me! And I'm so glad I gave you that hint about Poets of the fall, they're one of my favorites :)
I'm at work reviewing this, because my own computer is still at my fathers work place getting fixed. *sniff, sniff* I miss my precious. lol
Anyway, now to the review!
Simply wonderful chapter, it was so teasing! but just perfectly teasing. The smut, just right I feel, not out of the board, it was believable!
Poor Uri, he's still so clueless about Shawn, and how he loves him. Hehe, what a way to wake up though, having your brother dry humping you, *giggles*
I'm in bit of a hurry now; I need to go and eat my lunch before the lady with the machine comes. hehe.
Can't wait for the next chap, you know I'll keep bugging you about it as soon as I get my precious back! ^_^
I'm at work reviewing this, because my own computer is still at my fathers work place getting fixed. *sniff, sniff* I miss my precious. lol
Anyway, now to the review!
Simply wonderful chapter, it was so teasing! but just perfectly teasing. The smut, just right I feel, not out of the board, it was believable!
Poor Uri, he's still so clueless about Shawn, and how he loves him. Hehe, what a way to wake up though, having your brother dry humping you, *giggles*
I'm in bit of a hurry now; I need to go and eat my lunch before the lady with the machine comes. hehe.
Can't wait for the next chap, you know I'll keep bugging you about it as soon as I get my precious back! ^_^
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is just too cruel. Poor Shawn:( I think he should take his brother's advice and tell Uriell how he feels. But I think he feels the same way about it as Uri, he is affraid, that his little brother would freak out if he knew. I just want to hit both on the head, while I Shout "STUPID! You love each other!"
Oh, and I loved the sceen where Shawn made food for his brother again, and when they cuddled up together in the bed XD. Lovely sceen! And I was waiting for Shawn to moan Uri's name in the end, it would have made things so much easyer.
And I have a theory about the familly secret, but I'm not going to tell yet, it may be a great spoiler, if I'm right, so I think I'll tell later if I was right ^^
So I have to check in every day, looking for the update again XD. I love your work, I'm starting to get addicted. *hugs you again* Thanks!
Oh, and I loved the sceen where Shawn made food for his brother again, and when they cuddled up together in the bed XD. Lovely sceen! And I was waiting for Shawn to moan Uri's name in the end, it would have made things so much easyer.
And I have a theory about the familly secret, but I'm not going to tell yet, it may be a great spoiler, if I'm right, so I think I'll tell later if I was right ^^
So I have to check in every day, looking for the update again XD. I love your work, I'm starting to get addicted. *hugs you again* Thanks!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES I liked it! If Uri is the emperor of obliviousness then Shawn is the GOD of awkward moments. I really feel sorry for him. He has obviously been going through the same hell as Uri only for much longer. Could Shawn by any chance have noticed Uri's initial reaction to his touch? He could have felt his erection and start to suspect his attactions are mutual and try to lure Uri into giving in to it? Right? Come on tell me that's a great idea!
Okay so Uri is stil clueless. He's so dense, lol. And the fact that all Shawn wanted for his birthday was a hug, and the fact he was humping his leg practically moaning his name is not enough to even ring a bell in Uri's head. All Uri's long time unsatisfied erection should start to become really painful by the way. He does know how to masturbate, does he? If not Shawn could demonstrate....
Haha, I'm totally picturing it right now. LMAO!
Okay so Uri is stil clueless. He's so dense, lol. And the fact that all Shawn wanted for his birthday was a hug, and the fact he was humping his leg practically moaning his name is not enough to even ring a bell in Uri's head. All Uri's long time unsatisfied erection should start to become really painful by the way. He does know how to masturbate, does he? If not Shawn could demonstrate....
Haha, I'm totally picturing it right now. LMAO!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just recently read this story, and I have to tell you, it's amazing! Definetly keep writing: I'm looking forward to the rest of this story (which keeps frustrating me because you always leave off at the worst(or best, when you think about it) parts!^_^)and I'm also looking forward to other stories to come!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know how much I love your story. I swear each time you update I squeel, this chapter was by far the best. <3 I can't wait for the *next* chapter. -wink wink-