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omg Uri stop being such a angst ridden biatch.gettin humped once in a while is a plus [even god must know that] even gettin humped by ur major hottie bro is dbl. plus.another awesomly awesome chapie.can't wait till next one.

Ah teeta,

It was such a sad chapter, and I thought poor Uri was getting a sense of humor, sort of, about it, not taking it so serious. Boy, was I wrong.

I do wish he had someone, anyone to confide in, before he gets major depressed.

I wish I knew more about what Shawn was feeling and thinking, I'm worried about him too. You sure made me care for these two characters.

It was a well written, long and angsty chapter and as always, I wish for more.

*hugs*

It's very sad... Snif ! I want that they speak to each other ! And I want to ask you a question ?! Are they really brothers ? ^^

Poor Poor Uri,(his got a really nice name btw) he really is blaming himself for everything, and all these morbid thoughts probably won't make him feel any better, and his crying now too. First he wanted to avoid Shawn but then now Shawns the one who wants to avoid him, its probably breaking his heart. I really hope things get better for him, his wallowing in a lot of self hatred right now.

Anyways great update, as always!

Hello my little Slyfox (laughs and kisses cheek) ^_^, before I get to complimenting you on another wonderful chapter of yours, I supose that I should tell you why I have taken my work off of AFF. I am a (USMC)Marine and will be going away for a while. I am leaving and will have no time to write, much less update, so I am taking off my stories until I get back from Iraq. I don't know how long I will be gone but they have informed me that it will be more then three months .... so forgive me if I will not be able to review your next upcoming chapters, though I am hoping that by the time I get back,(hopefully, fingers crossed) that you will have a lemon in place? ^_^ I will post maybe some new stories and my old ones when I get back...so on a so forth, anyways enough about me. Your chapter 15! I loved it, your wording is perfect and discribing Uri's emotions is perfectly written as usual. Though I feel so bad for poor Uri and Shawn. Uri Just Does Not Get It! I find it rather frustrating, but it will lead me to hurry back home to see what happens and my beloved Shawn...(he is just so tasty, if he were my brother, I would not care if it was incestious...I'd do him! XD) XD So keep up the great work and I will review when I get back *!!Wish me luck!!*

Until I get back from Iraq ....IndigoCurse

It's getting so sad! I can't wait for the next chapter! By the way, I loved the metaphor of Uri the teenager and Uriel the archangel. Did you intend to include that in the story from the beginning, or did it just hit you one day?

This was a fantastic chapter. I loved the part about church, and how consistant you're being with Uri's reaction to his feelings: vomiting. I love how the guilt is really starting to set in, and how he's jumping to conclustions... and of course I love how hard he's falling.

Still a fantastic story, love, and please update soon!

Awww...how sad :( But it will get better, that's the important thing ^^ as it is, this was a wonderful chapter, all agnsty and stuff...hugs poor, obliviouse, miserable Uri. This is the price some people pay for innocence....

Keep up the wonderful work! i can't wait to see the next chapter :D

Oh I feel so sorry for Shawn and Uri. I can't wait until they resolve this. I love both these characters. You're doing such a great job writing this story. Please update soon.

YES! and the plot thickens [somewhat XD] this chapter was love. not only because there was "action" but because i could feel my eyes prickling - which means it was teary in some areas XD nothing i love more than a story that can pull emotion from me.

i dont know whats wrong with me, but i think i feel worse for shawn than i do for uri for some reason. poor shawn. i bet he was dreaming about uri and was so horrified because she thought uri knew about his infatuation. i really love this story and sorry it took me so long to review.

ive been fricken busy as hell lately.
but nothing will keep me from this story. ever.

*waits for next update*