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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH My Goddess in Heaven! 0_0 I totally loved it! ^0^ I just got on here and your story was the very first one I have read and ..... I have no words! Your writing is so totally awesome! ~Kisses and hugs and that good stuff that make girls wiggle and giggle~ I ..... I think I love you! XD Lol J/k, but naw, seriously I think your story rox and your characters are so sexy ..... Shawn, black hair and green eyes. ~Drools and licks her lips~ Dear Mother of Mercy, make me one? Oh I am so gonna review on the next chapter k? Love ya lots and I am so glad I finnaly got to be on here.
LYL: Scarlet Obsession
LYL: Scarlet Obsession
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The tension was build up so skillfully in chapter 14, with little twists, like forgetting pyjamas, and the resulting reactions and interactions, I could feel it myself. The bedscene was awesome, I loved the idea of Uri being in this state between dream and slowly awakening, because I could't imagine him going that far in this situation otherwise. It's realistic and plausible that the atmosphere turned so awkward after that and causes further misinterpretations and misunderstandings, and Uri's religiousness adds even more pressure on top of blaming himself. Although the recent events affect them badly and threaten to tear them apart, I'm glad that you keep the story so authentic. Very touching and captivating, and yes I was also very happy with the length of chapter 14. Many thanks!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe, I feel so bad for Uri and Shawn! I hope they figure things out and become 'friends' .. again LoL XD
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. But if you don't be nice to them soon, rabid llamas will eat you. They're hungry. So be good to them. =P
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Uri D: All I can say is he's definately got a lot stronger willpower than me XD ...And I can't ever hold in secrets. So props to him for that X3
But yeah, he's got some serious angst time going on. I wanna give the poor kid a hug.
But yeah, he's got some serious angst time going on. I wanna give the poor kid a hug.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter. x3
I'm finding myself addicted to this fiction. I keep coming back to see if another chapters been up yet...I'd love to say hurry up, but I know the best fictions come with time. =o So do take your time with it.
-eats cookie-
Mmmm...200th post never tasted so good. xP
I'm finding myself addicted to this fiction. I keep coming back to see if another chapters been up yet...I'd love to say hurry up, but I know the best fictions come with time. =o So do take your time with it.
-eats cookie-
Mmmm...200th post never tasted so good. xP
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh HELL YES!!!!! An Update!!!!! ^-^ You totally just made my day!!
Poor Uri! Poor Shawn! they're both prolly thinking the same thing! "my brother probably hates me and is disgusted by me right now!" *cries* please please please! Put them out of their misery!! PLEASE!!!
Very well done chapter! I enjoyed it, even though Uri was so sad...
Looking forward to the next one!
Poor Uri! Poor Shawn! they're both prolly thinking the same thing! "my brother probably hates me and is disgusted by me right now!" *cries* please please please! Put them out of their misery!! PLEASE!!!
Very well done chapter! I enjoyed it, even though Uri was so sad...
Looking forward to the next one!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty! I have been keeping up with this story and finally have the chance to review! sry I couldnt before! I just want to say how much I adore this story. I have always been into and thought of brotherly (more than) love and I love it! You are awesome and thank god for the action FINALLY! I thought I was goig to DIE if nothing happened between them after all those chapters! But I love it,too! I just love all of it! ok.....cant wait for next chapter! seriously!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thee-hee another great chapter.... ^_________^~*
You keeps making me come back for more!
But yes I can understand what shawn's feeling, but whats the matter with Uri?
I've know people with much more worse situation, but they didn't go near as to vomit...
feeling too guilty I guess?
anyways Great job, and I like how you updated so fast
keep it up!!!
Yuu
You keeps making me come back for more!
But yes I can understand what shawn's feeling, but whats the matter with Uri?
I've know people with much more worse situation, but they didn't go near as to vomit...
feeling too guilty I guess?
anyways Great job, and I like how you updated so fast
keep it up!!!
Yuu
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no, moaning his name wasn't enough!!! >.<
Uri is reeeeeaaaaally starting to piss me off. i get Shawn, but Uri.....cut out the fucking pity party, dude. it's not ALL about you! >.< ....it's about you AND HIM & FUCKING! NOW!!!!!
as he was thinking about the angel Uriel, i just couldn't help but think "riiight, wisdom. -wisdom in this situation would be getting your head out of your ass & thinking for yourself, instead of blindly following antiquated church edicts which have almost NO bearing on a modern world. it would be LISTENING to god through your own heart & not just reciting empty dogmatic verses!" >.<
i hope u get to this story's climax soon....i don't think i can take anymore rising action. *tired*
Uri is reeeeeaaaaally starting to piss me off. i get Shawn, but Uri.....cut out the fucking pity party, dude. it's not ALL about you! >.< ....it's about you AND HIM & FUCKING! NOW!!!!!
as he was thinking about the angel Uriel, i just couldn't help but think "riiight, wisdom. -wisdom in this situation would be getting your head out of your ass & thinking for yourself, instead of blindly following antiquated church edicts which have almost NO bearing on a modern world. it would be LISTENING to god through your own heart & not just reciting empty dogmatic verses!" >.<
i hope u get to this story's climax soon....i don't think i can take anymore rising action. *tired*