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Oh, come on!!!! *stomps in frustration* Here, I see a very long chapter expecting good things to happen, but no... you're just the queen of romantic suspense right now huh!??! *SIGH!* Anyway, great chapter update! I missed this story and I'm so glad there was an update. I hope there's another one soon! Hopefully with smut in it!

take care!

Okay, looks like they both need to open their eyes. *sigh* I was hoping at least one of them cought on to the other's interest but no, now they're both locked up in their own little sad world of misery. You get a cookie for being cruel, but I was really hoping this was going somewhere in the end. I'm going to say it bluntly; these guys need to get laid. XD

Thanks for the jerk off joke, you made me smile in spite of the sad chapter.

Please UPDATE SOON! I'm dying here! I love your story and I miss it so much!

PLEASE UPDATE!

I think your story is great! and the last chapter was strong, the tension between everybody was like phisical!
udate soon please, because i cannot wait to see how the relationship will evolve :)

...You wrote more.... yay....

Ok, I am obsessed with this story. I check it every morning and evening for updates and I even think about it in school and when I'm driving. Please update soon!!

OMG!!
and i thought uri was making progress! PROGRESS I TELL YOU!
now hes back to throwing up and feeling disgusted and guilty. man... this chapter was depressing :( i even cried a little. i still feel absolutely terrible for shawn. uri thinks hes disgusted with him, but i bet shawn thinks the same thing uri does. and after uri had told him he wasnt disgusting, something like this happens?! poor shawn [i seem to be saying that a lot lately]. i bet he's going through a lot worse shit than uri is at the moment.

but i still feel terrible for uri too. i loved the reference to his name and the whole "fallen angel" ploy. brings some symbolism into the story. very nice touch.

just wondering how long you think this will be? its a wonderful story and id even like to think it might get published as a small novel if you tried. it portrays something such as this in a very real and life-chaning way.

but yey! you updated! now i get to wait for another chapter [which i hope is a bit more on the cheerful/hopeful side]. but if not, i understand. things like this cant be easy.

*waits*

Chapter 17 (I think it's 17) - Oh, poor, poor Uri and his whole fear of being an incestual pervert. Really, it's heartbreaking how bad he's taking it. And Shawn isn't any better. They make me want to be all angsty with them. Oh well. Amazing chapter as usual!

Oops. I meant chapter 15.

What do I think of this last line? For the situation--perfect. I think that it's interesting how Uri automatically thinks that everything is all his fault. It's as if he's experiencing one of those scenarios where he sees everyone else pointing the finger of blame at him, even though none of them even know what's going on inside of his head. That shows just how guilty he is, and I like how that really reinforces his character. *shakes head* This chapter was so wonderful. Even if you didn't get any major inspiration for this chapter, you did a wonderful job writing it because I was reaching for tissue the entire time (and that's rare for me. I hardly ever cry unless it's for something that has strong angst).

My favorite part of this chapter by far was when Uri saw the shirt Shawn was wearing: "I have a big cock" and he said... well, thought... that he didn't know how literal that statement was until the night before. I was seriously cracking up at that part! :D

Just so you know, I recommended this story to someone I know; she read it the first night that I recommended it to her, and she's hooked now. ^-^ Serious awesomeness you got here! (I kinda motivated her to read it by telling her how I was so anxious to find out what happened in the next chapter because "it's not everyday that you wake up to your brother humping your leg." XD That has got to be the greatest attention getter ever!)