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Arg, missed to comment on chapter 15! It’s all the exams fault. I totally forgot about your story, but I’m back again!!
This was a wonderful chapter! I’m so glad Uri and Shawn are more or less back to normal.
Shawn comforting his brother after a bad nightmare was so cute!!! I hope the situation at school will improve a bit for Uri too.

Wonderful chapter Teeta, simply wonderful, I'm glad your muse is back ^_^ Poor Uri seeing all those nightmares (that were written very well) and thinking Shawn hates him, when the reality... well the reality is different, at least they made up in the end of the chapter which was oh so very sweet and I loved it!!

Oh and that Kyle is a dick! How can anyone hit sweet Uri?! I remember once getting a football straight in my stomach (I guess I was at the wrong place at the wrong time) and it hurt like hell, I remember thinking that I'd die because I couldn't catch my breath for the longest time, lol. Well I could definitely relate to what Uri was feeling right there!

Thank you for this chapter Teeta ^.^ *hugs*

So...when is Uri going to figure out Shawn's in love with him? 'cause... it's kinda been obvious since early on, but mabye that's just my inner fan girl (who desperatly wants Shawn and Uri to get together, by the way) talking....? I'm not sure. Anyway, I can't wait till the next chapter! (P.S. I hate Kyle. He's mean to poor Uri. And what happened to that nice jock who defended Uri? That's who Kyle was refering to as Uri's boyfriend.... So will he show up again?)

THANK YOU SO MUCH for this chapter, love. It was wonderful! I LOVED how it ended, and the set-up was just beautiful. This was one of your best chapters yet!

GREAT job!

(And please don't make me wait so long for the next chapter! This is my favourite on-going story right now and the wait was TORTURE!)

Muchos gracias!

AHAH!!
best story i've ever read.,
i was looking for Uri to completely break, and cry for Shawn's love again.
like, i wanna be brothers again! i love you!! im so sorry.
and Shawn would be like, its okay, i dont hate you blah blah blah.,
but i must say, that dream was intense.
i liked the hint o' violence with the bat.
just madness.
and i LOVE it.

I think you have a thing for bathroom !! >.< Oh my ! This bathroom scene (the first one) was something !!
And also, you like torture this poor boy...

Hello teeta, I suppose it has been a while since I have given you an update. I see that your work is as flawless as ever? I guess I should also explain to you why I have been gone for so long, I had an accident and had to stop writing for a while,(lost my right eyesight) but I am back! ^_^ My old stories will be back up and running, with a ton of new chapters ~_^!!!! Okay, enough about me, MY GOD IN THE HOLYEST HEAVEN! You my dear, are still talented beyond words!! I am not a fan of 'I' fictions, but yours.....*huggles to death!* Yours, is the only one that can allure me with your words! Uri! I just damn right love the kid! He is a little....uhm....skittish at times, makes me want to smack him across the head and tell him that Shawn loves him too, but *shrugs* what can you do? Anyways, I am so glad that they are talking again,*hopes for a lemon real soon XD* I mean when I came back and read the chapters that I had missed, I ended up staying up till four in the morning just to catch up. My curiousity got the better of me and I was shouting and crying and....I actually cried *sighs* Your story is just that realistic. I felt like one of those soap opera fans who record every episode and talk about them at work. (I do talk about your story at work also ^_^) I am just so glad to be back! You have made so much progress over the weeks, and months. I am just so glad that you have your oun fan base and you rightly deserve them! I wish you all the luck and anxiously await your next update. I will be updateing mine as well so dont be a stranger! ^_^

Always: Jaden Lee Faye

XD Awww!!!! That was just so sweet! I adore the way you ended this one!! *tackleglompshuggles* It was just so.....yeah! (I think you can fillin the word I'm looking for as in my excitment to see this chapter up, it escaped me and i have yet to hire bounty hunters to track it back down for me)

I loved the whole chapter!!!! <3

Awww, that's a bit of relief there :3 Of course I'm highly impatient for the next chapter, but then again I always am. ...Especially so this time XD But after reading this, I'm a bit inspired to start up my next story, hmmm.

Yay! *clapps and bounces around happily* *bumps into several objects* I'm so happy that they're talking to each other again. That was so cute! *clapps again and bounces around even more* *bumps into something and finds her self eating floor* *stands up and laughs akwardly* *grins* Anyway, I'm so glad you updated. It takes awhile but it's worth it! I hope you update soon.