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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person Hell
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, reading this is almost pure agony! I wanna know how it turns out damnit ;_;
Greatly written, of course, and basically awesome but hell, the end of this chapter is almost as bad a cliffhanger as the last one D: The development of the characters is almost scaring me!
I really hope it goes well with you IRL, and that you'll find the precious time to write the next chapters.. I'll be waiting patiently <3
Hell~
person Munez
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Things are just taking a turn for the fucked up. Well, more fucked up. That's life, I guess. I really do wish for a happy ending, but the way things are going...

I'm looking forward to the final updates.
person roro237
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so sad! I have been wiping my eyes off and on senses the hospital. WoW! that was so good and no I didn't see it comming!! Even after he said his mother killed herself. Poor Uri carrying the hole load. I think Shawn is trying to get over his feeling for Uri. I can't wait to read what Shawn has been thinking!:) I love this story!!! Have I told you lately how much I love your long chapers! I was so into the story I did't hear the phone ring and short of the house exploding I'm can't be reached untill chapter ends:)
person kylee
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update. It seems like Shawn and Uri will drive their parents and family insane while trying to come to terms with this love of theirs. I think Uri needs to take charge of hi me" or even not hiding from him all the time. They are both drama queens but I can't believe that Uri has never had the urge to explain any part of that Friday to Shawn.s life a little more. He seems to always look at how things affect him. He never seems to think about Shawn's feelings. Even with Shawn's suicide attempt, all he thinks about is how guilty he feels and how everything is his fault. Perhaps he should focus on showing his love for Shawn a little more. Maybe saying "I love you even if you did try to rape me." They should be more focused on breaking the news to their family than on fighting with each other.
person MayoRose
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im dying!! i've read youre story for such a long time!
im a fan! i cant wait till you update!!
and ive fallen in love with Rane and Dan! :D
update, update, update, please, please, pretty please!! :D
>_
person Munez
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. You're cruel. You can't just leave it there! That should be illegal. And wow... things just don't go right for Uri, do they? I was wondering when we'd see that darker side of Shawn again! Intense. I can't wait for the next update.
person GellyBelly
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 33.. OMG SHAWN AND MAX!!
person GellyBelly
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn... They were doing it and then BOOM! Uri ruined everything by saying his
brothers name... I knew it was going to happen man...
person GellyBelly
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh.. THE CONFRONTATION.
person GellyBelly
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Finally some incest and again i'm quite thankful it's not about
those Tokio Hotel twins -_-