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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person LJ
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! I've been looking forward to this chapter for so long! I've checked every day!

=D

I love the chapter, it's the smexiest yet, and I LOVE the ending. Awesome.

Kyle won't try anything, right?

I mean, more than he already did?

PLEASE NO!

Uri must be preserved for Shawn.

=D

Thanks again for the chapter, I LOVED IT!

And:

PLEASE UPADATE SOON, SOON, SOON! *Gives cookie to speed up writing*

PLEASE!
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!! I am LOVING this!!!!! Uri is so adorable!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person DraculUnknown
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! THANKS for the cliffhanger you meanie! lol! this was another awesome chapter! i was very happy, but the end I was like....."wtf!omg!yuck!" lol wrong so wrong! i really do not like that kyle character! cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!omgwtflol! I have such a way with words...haha(goes with the chapter)
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did love your new chapter, I was so relieved that Shawn didn't hate him or anything. =) Can't wait for the next one. <3
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the last chapter, and I was very glad that Shawn is not mad at Uri, but I think he is mad at himself for wath happened at that night. How could he hate Uri, when he loves him so much. I really look forward to the next chapter (I check every day!!!) Please continue soon, I'm dieing here to read your work! *hugs!*
person sharingan.swirl
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Bouncing up and down in chair.... stomping feet too* WHERE'S the update!?!?!? I'm dying here!! lol nah, not mad. Your story's just that good! So please please please update soon!!?!?!? *grin*
person Aoi Hana
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to the next chapter. I am so glad that this story keeps going. I love reading about girly boy, and about girly boy being bullied even more (fetish). Please, upload soon.
person morris
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story so much! I hope that you update soon.
person xomizkimox
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello! i usually don't review since I'm new but i love your fic and i hope you post more soon(with some action, if you know what i mean~;P) cause I'm dying to know what's to come in the future~<3thanks for writing!
person lalala
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its good kinda creepy but good not sure if they're gonna end upt together

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