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I am very curious about the tickling sensation he flet when he was asleep. Hmmmmm

Ok here I am again. Forgot to say that I'm hoping Uri forgot something and Shawn comes into the school to give it to him and then rides up on his big white horse and saves the day!

Oh This chapter was brilliant! I was snickering here as I was reading and the dog was looking at me like; oh now she went all crazy on me, hehe.

That conversation between Shawn and Uri; omg it was even better than what I had expected! I think, hm, I think this was my favorite chapter so far, and as for Uri being OOC? I didn't see it. Nope. Obvious? Yes. But Omg, Shawn was so... I loved him, oh and the thing where Uri was getting back at Shawn...HARD... hehe! Good work, really good work and thank you for giving us this chapter!!! *hugs*

And this Kyle character? Someone will kick his arse, right? Because I just might.

(And once again; thank you for the thing with Vodka! ^_^ lol)

-C-

WOOT!!!! XD the bully kissed him!! ...now, does he TRULY not like a guy kissing him? -or just the situation?
& i'm glad Shawn is growing some balls too. ^_^ & Uri is finally coming around & acting realistically.

Uri's YOUR character -i don't think he CAN be OOC. ^_~

CHAPTER 17
Whoa! Did Kyle the Jock just stole Uri's First Kiss? Or not? I don't remember him being kissed before by anyone, might read the story again to verify that, hehe. What a cliffhanger!

I didn't think that Uri was OOC, actually the opposite. He was OOC ever since Shawn kissed his wrist a week ago, they used to chat and joke around before that. So, them teasing each other felt like a glimpse from 'good old times', only with some extra innuendo.

Hope that your Muse likes extra added pressure, because writing on the spot is a bizzare experience; In my humble opinion, quality is more important than quantity, so, not being able to update every week is OK, it's pretty normal, actually. Some people update ones a month. Very good chapter:)

I love your brothers name, btw

Chapter 17

No, I think Uri's in character. This new and both welcome and unwelcome infatuation would do that, wouldn't it? Anyone would manage to strengthen themselves for awhile, then weaken again...that's understandable completely.

And of course, Shaun gets the upper hand in the conversation, as usual. Uri tries, but like the very first chapter, Uri doesn't win.

Very cute. To be honest, after all this time I'm not even sure I want there to be any smut between them. It would be enough that they admit their love and comfort each other, strengthen each other, understand each other and let it go...

Maybe that's your intention, but I'm not good at guessing like you are! *grin*

Yeah. I can now, finally, picture the perfect ending to this in my head. *sigh*

Okay, thanks as usual, another fun chapter that got me smiling. Love and mushy stuff and lots of it, K

that bastard of Kyle! rah! I'm angry and I want to punch him! Shawn! Come! Help your poor brother! Uri is so "huggable"...ah I can't help myself! I like Uri so much...and Shawn...ah Shawn...I'm drooling now (no, I don't have rabies!)
and the end of this chapter...oh oh you too are a fan of cliff-hangers!
thank you for your reply! You're very kind too! and concerning the next update of my story, er...I'm slow...but he! I'm trying !

hem by the way, what does OOC mean ? (I feel very very stupid by asking that, since evrybody seems to know...but I'm not quite familiar to abbreviations O.o)
er...hehe

I love this story ... poor uri

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!