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Oh I was almost squealing when I saw that you had updated, lol. And oh it was so fun to read; Uri bit his tongue; go Uri!

And then it was so amusing to read how he tried to think of that kiss he would like, with the no Shawn boy, who turned out to be Shawn! *giggles* Kyle had no right to steal his first kiss like that, first kisses are suppose to be special. Though mine wasn't that great either, lol. But still Uri deserves a better kiss!

And Rane is back! I'm so glad, and yes poor Uri had a very eventful day, didn't he? Now Rane asked him to be his boyfriend? Oh wow. Can't want for the next chapter!

Thank you Teeta *hugs*

NO!!! Omg.... Ok, first, fun update!! I liked the whole fantasy of "not-shawn". Second, Rane and Uri.... no! :( It's cute... don't get me wrong, but it would just put off shawn more... make him feel worse, especially after Uri kept telling shawn to tell "the girl" that he liked "her". *cries* I don't know... you're the author. Don't let me tell you what to do. i'm just complaining. :)

So... how long till the next update? (I'm guessing 2-3 weeks?) LOL i kid i kid! I don't care how long i wait anymore. I love your story.

OMG OMG OMG I KNEW IT!
I knew rane wanted him!.
Totally love this update, cant w8 to read more
Its an excellent story!
A++

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!! I must say I DID miss Shawn, but having Rane in the chapter MORE than made up for it!!!!!!! GAH, ok Uri should just be able to have them both. It'll be like one big happy gay threesome!!!!!!! Hee hee I can't help it, I like Rane and Shawn. I'm not sure what you're going to do here, and I don't want to say what I'm thinking just in case I'm right or remotely right. Just update FAST FAST FAST PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!

.........*can't find words*.................


This story is great!!!!!!!!!
Poor Uriel *hugs*!?!?!?!

I like your story very much^^
it's some how funny but on the other side rather sad. I like that!
The brothers are really interesting and I'm really curious about
how the relationship between Shawn, Rane and Uriel is developing
in this story after the last question from Rane.

Poor Shawn somehow it appears to me that NOBODY has got a clue
how he is feeling about the wohl situation. Especialy Uriel!!!

Well.....*poke*.......... PLEASE FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!
*can't wait for a new chapter*

*wave* Daishi-chan

In general I don't like insect very much but this story is really good.
I like the way the things are going, the flow of the events is not rushed or too slow.
And the characters are great too.

*whistle* so all of them jump Uri? this is so cute... though one shoulr have SOME pity on poor Uri. the kid's goin through a lot.

^^ update this is awesome!

Chapter 18 - DAMN! You surprised me AGAIN! Oh my God. Totally unexpected. I mean...he like... asked him out! HE ASKED HIM OUT! That's not suppose to happen. Ooo. But now Shawn will get all jealous and posessive. Yum. I can't wait. Oh well. I'm just going along for the ride.

Oh My GOD! I can't believe he said that. ... Well i expected something like this, but later. WOW. This is so... well I'm out of words. Rane is so nice, and seriously if I would be Uri i wouldn't know what to say to this. And imagine what would... (well, will) happen when Shawn finds out about this! It'll be a total disaster! But maybe he will tell Uri about his feelings. It would be about time. :)))

Well this chapter was wonderfull and I'm looking forward to the next one.(have to check it every day twice!;)) I really look forward to the next one! *hugs you tightly* Thanks for this wonderfull story!!!

OH MY GOD! O_O I...I do not know what to say! Well, I do...but ..I ...wow..Okay, give me a moment to gather my thoughts here. ^_^ I TOTALLLY LOVED IT!!!!! The whole thinking about a better kiss thing! My favorite lines are "I wonder what he would taste like? Oranges?" And my other is "I bet he would be playfull; he always is." AWWEEE SHawn! He was so totally thinking about sexy, deliciously handsome, rougish, pussycat sly SHAWN! ~_^ That was untimately classic! Rane.....O_O Oh my....*drools at the mouth* Rane asked Uri out!? I so was not expecting that wicked twist! I ca not wait until you whip up another sizziling chappy! *gives your muse a good kitten licking* XD

Always: JadenLeeFaye