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I'm loving this story! Completely confused now by some characters.. Especially Kyle. And now Rane. And will Uri ever get a clue?! More please!

J'adore this story. It's adorable that Uri is so loveable yet self depreciating. Can't wait until he stops being so thick and realizes his feelings are reciprocated to some degree. I don't usually go for incest but this is fabulous work ^_^

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON! I'M DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, I KNEW THAT URI WAS GOING TO BE ASKED OUT BY THAT JOCK! I KNEW IT!!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON?! I NEED TO KNOW IF URI ACCEPTS?! AT LEAST AS AN EXPERMENT OR WHO KNOWS MAYBE HE WILL DEVELOP FEELINGS?
WE WON'T KNOW TILL YOU UPDATE SOO PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU
THE WOLF

OMG!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down on the spot* How could you leave it at that!!!!!!!!!!!!

*begs pitifully* please update

Oh...Umm...Wow.
This chapter was great(thank You for Your work (and for this all replies too)), now story really moved forward. Normally I woudn't enjoy this whole kissing thing (I like action, real, not in somebody head), but You made it so pretty and easy to imagine that I actually liked it. And after that... Wow. I am glad that there would be more people involved and plus You said aloud what every girl already knew... do you hear me, boys? We know that every one of you is a gay. Ha ha.

Chapter 18

Awww...poor Uri...thinks his first kiss is 'stolen' but he didn't kiss back, did he? Just having lips on yours isn't a kiss is it? It's still cute he thinks that, maybe he'll realize when he really does get his first 'kiss' that there's a big difference. What's this Kyle's problem? Is it one of those, protest too much things?

But anyway, Uri was brave to bite him and kick him...and he's calling himself gay without such self reproach...accepting it better than alot of kids would. And just grateful for anyone who likes him the way he is.

His fear of hiding things... of it all coming back to haunt him...that is so real, so teen angsty...most of us have been there and can definitely identify with him.

Ahh, day dreaming in class...*smirk* his little fantasy experiment, it was adorable, he knows alot more than I did about kisses before I really got one, god, he's so analytical...

trying not to think of it being with Shawn. Yet, that's the image that pops in, isn't it...this is how obsession starts, I mean real obsession, I'm starting to feel worse and worse for Uri...what he's doing to himself without even realizing it. It will be much harder to get out of than it was to get into if it goes on like this for long.

Rane is still a good friend and what I suspected is true, he likes Uri...more than just as a friend and now he finally made his move.

Uri's life is changing, all because of that one encounter with Shawn that aroused him, and the ones since...and maybe it's so much more a true way these things happen, not just some sudden revelation.

You're doing a great job with this. Sorry took me so long to read this, but my muse was working actually wrote more than two chapters yesterday! But I had to get to this, I love this story so. I hope the next chapter comes to you fast...

Thank you, teeta, lots of love and hugs and stuff, K

Back to review Chapter 18!

Woot! The ideas are stumbling in my head I don`t even know with what to begin. First of all would have to be: EVIL!!!! Such a cliffhanger... and Uri`s first kiss? Urghh... I am not letting you talk to Laaerie anymore, bad influence I tell you... just look what you created... Kyle kissing Uri. The bastard got what he deserved...his tongue bitten haha, way to go Uri. And the little part about tasting Kyle`s blood in his mouth...sadistic and enticing... never knew you had it in you Teeta. That was something new and very enjoyable (*inner voice: Loved it all!! Rane`s surprise question, Uri`s fantasy, Kyle`s kiss. Give it to me baby, more and ten times fold :P *)

I might have guessed Rane would do that. I mean, I had my suspicions about him and well, you cleared those the last time we talked. At first I was kind of bummed to see that Uri had his first kiss stolen by a jerk like Kyle and will probably have his first time with Rane. But well... after this chapter, seeing Rane so protective and interested in Uri... not to mention that his coolness and nonchalance and, pretty much that magic and charisma he has led me to think that he might not be such a bad first time for Uri. And it would make a good impression if Uri was a little bit more experienced when he finally does end up with Shawn (I refuse to believe they will never be intimate... I simply refuse). It would totally shock Shawn *snicker* to find his little brother not so innocent in the ways of men X men relationships... sexual relationships *sticks tongue out*

Anyway, getting back in track (I wouldn`t want to leave a too long comment, like last time.. you might get bored reading). The scene in the classroom was hilarious. I was expecting the teacher to scold Uri for daydreaming or talking out loud about his kiss with Kyle. But thank God that didn`t happen. No need for the whole school to find out about Uri and Kyle. Though their suspicions will be confirmed once they see Uri and Rane together. Another thing to look forward to *jumps around*

And the way Rane managed to get everything out of Uri. He seems to have a way of persuading people. Or he just gives off this vibe that Uri cannot help but confide in him. Or maybe since Rane was the example of a jock not a jackass and actually trying to protect him... And it`s surprising how Uri was so perceptive of Rane, discovering he smokes and that`s he`s gay. And yet, alas, clueless when it comes to his own brother.. *sigh*.. Ohh, liked the "hunk" thing about Shawn...couldn`t agree more *wipes drool*...*still thinking about the kiss Uri dremat about*

The imaginary kiss! LOL... ROFL That was fabulous. The way poor Uri still ended up dreaming of Shawn. The ways of love *sigh* LOL And the care he took not to think of Shawn. I thought he would end up seeing dreaming of Kyle or Rane but Shawn was a much better option. And I have to say that was a very HOT kiss... damn, if just an imaginary kiss is that steamy, imagine how the actual sex scene is going to be *rubs hands in expectation* Can`t wait to see what you`ll do then, Teeta XD

I`ll stop here...my fingers are starting to hurt and wouldn`t want to babble for too long. WRITE CHAPTER 19 ALREADY...DYING HERE! LOL Take your time to bring us the usual saucy and wonderful story! *kisses cheek*

......hmmmm. I have to say, I sort of saw that coming, but it was still a total shock. I really felt like Rane liked Uri, but... I wasn't sure if it was meant to come off that way; because Rane is a hard character to read. But Kyle, wow, now he's almost stalking Uri! I was sad that Shawn was missing this chapter, but the instance with Rane totally made up for it! I feel really bad for Uri: now he has to decide whether or not to date Rane. Uri himself wouldn't, I guess, but with Kyle stalking him, he might feel more comfortable having Rane closer to him, since Kyle is obviously afraid of the man. But what would Uri's friends say if Uri CONFIRMED the rumors that he's gay? And Shawn would FLIP! He'd probably kill Rane if he found out Uri was dating him! AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! You've left us with quite the cliffhanger! ^_^ I can't WAIT for the next update!!! I'm addicted to this story!!!
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^_^ Your adoring fan, ^_^
-Dee

Okay, so I love your story, but I'm lazy and so have never reviewed even though I've been following Not Supposed To since about the time chapter 10 was posted. Eroburn yelled at me for this and she's right if I like your story that much I should at least tell you so. So great fic, love it.

Woah. I would like to say that I didn't see that coming... but I kind of did. I was a little bit suspicious that Rane was either gay or bi, and the way that he was so protective of Uri whenever he'd show up in the story made me guess that he would probably end up liking Uri. Man. Talk about intense. I loved that Rane called Shawn a hunk. I wonder what he'd do if he found out that Uri liked Shawn? *sighs* But I like Rane (not nearly as much as Shawn, but...) he's a really nice guy, smoking and all. Every time that he pops up in the story, I actually picture Axel from Kingdom Hearts. I luff Axie.

Thanks for the welcome back. I am feeling a lot better. I don't know what exactly was wrong with me, but I was just feeling so depressed. I'm glad to be back and happy again... Although with spring break coming up, I'm starting to become slightly depressed again (because I might have to spend my entire break with cousins that I don't really get along with). Oh well, I'll be satisfied as long as I can read your fic. ^^

*huggles*
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