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for the day my life ended

by wrongonsomanylevels

schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey ^_^ I loved that update!! Hehehe evil cliffy there ^_~. I wonder what he saw ^_~. hahaha. Anyway, loving it soooo far ^_^. It's the best story I ever read and I want you to continue it ^_^. No butts...and STOP TELL ME TO UPDATE MY STORIES DAMN IT!! Haha ^^; sorry anyway, update soon! ^_^
person Victor
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(screams) Oh, you know i like this story, and i can say that with a straight face. Those two sexy dudes are really starting to turn my orientation^_^. Nah, not really but i enjoyed it nonetheless. CANT WAIT until chapter 4 is up. I'll be all over it, like i dream of Jake^_^. Wait, i didn't say that out loud did i^_^? This story is very well written and entertaining, can't wait to read more.
person Eica
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAHH I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENSSS!!!! WAHH!! *cries all dramatically and shizzle*

~Eica i bet it's Jake and.. someone... *paranoid*
person Nea
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your story. I do hope you choose to continue because I'd really like to see how this story ends. Hope to see an update soon! :)
person Kawanee
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When does the next chapter come out?
Love the story by the way!
I think this is only my second review given out... I only give them to people I really enjoyed reading.
person Eica
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HI!

ok

bye! no i'm kidding :P


Well, this is a very interesting story so far...

and the thing with Jake, very... erotic indeed!

~Eica tell me when you update so i can read more!
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is pretty damn good
it actually has a plot, and a good one at that
and an author with correct vocabulary and grammer
litterary high five :)
person TheCagedRibbon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Please continue.
person SinkingIntoDarkness
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was awesome!!! The smex was hot! ^_~. And I loved the fact that Jason's mom was bi with a perference for girls hahaha. I'm loving this story; so real and so much emotion ^^. Keep up the awesome work! ^^. Loved it!!! ^^
person nette
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoo! this chapter was hot to say the least. btw, can i have jake, i mean really danny doesn't need him all the time. no? ok then. good job and next time u threaten me to beta i will kill u. nah im just messing wit ya. cant wait to read more and find out wat will happen the next day wit jake/danny. not only that wat will happen to his family. update soon.

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