rate_review Reviews

ok first and foremost, WTF MAN! how dare u get another beta reader behind my back and expect me to continue to give u ideas and whatnot. hell to the nah. i aint with it. ok now that i am finished my rant (u will be hearing more) the chapter was good, u gettin better. ok thats all i hav to say. im done *turns and walks away*

btw if u ask me for help i will but not with this story since u have someone else *glares at new beta reader*

oh shit ha ha ha

i didn't really like the girl but otherwise it's till cool lol

~Eica

I was too lazy to log in haha ^^; Anyway, HI!! Yes, I enjoyed that chapter very much haha and man that was hot...seriously! It was just wonderfully done. I know if I read it a few more times I'd find that 'as' that shoulda been a 'was'....but meh. Anyway, it was done wonderfully and I just love this story very much. You have a lot of heart into it and the characters are the kind you can relate to a lot. I know I can relate to Danny a lot *gasp I remembered a name OO*, though not all that....sex stuff -^^;- haha, but still. Again, wonderful job, and awesome-ness to the cliffy hehe, tis truly evil. I can't wait to see who is outside that bathroom door and can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

PS. YA for not the threatening anymore, and no; I never promised to buy you a puppy, you imagined that. *sticks tongue out*

Later!

YEAH!! I've gotta say, i think this so far the best chapter. I'm not exactly sure why (i'm lying) but it was TOO good. I might as well have been watching HBO late night^_^ Good Work Kiri, CANNOT WAIT to read more^_^. *eyes wide, sitting by computer in anticipation for next chapter*

Overall, I'd have to say it was actually very good. You told me to read and review, and even though it's not my cup of tea, you do have talent with writing and painting a fairly vivid picture lol. only thing i noticed were a couple small grammatical errors but besides that, very nice. Better than i thought it would be, and because of my openess to your addiction of yaoi lol, I can honestly say you should be proud as a writer. I give it....................4 out of 5. seriously that pretty damn good coming from a hetero lol.

hey just stopping by to say hi and i DO like the story so im going to recommend this to a friend, josh/joshua, he's gay so he will definitely like this.

oooooooohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! that is simply without a doubt the most EVIL, VILE, thing you could do!! how could you leave such a cliff-hanger?? please dear sir or madame update before i cry ;___;

Wow! This is turning out to be really good. I love the way this is all written, and how the scenes are. Juicy~~

Ah, I hope Jake isn't doing anything too terrible. Danny sure seems to have a crush on him. ^_^; Great story so far!! Bed time for me though <3

.................................so i'm a lazy beta reader am I? is that so? well...................i guess we know where i stand as being ur friend huh...........yea pretty much....as i have said before DAMMIT IF U KEEP BUGGING ME TO DO IT I'M NOT GONNA DO IT (PAUSE). *CLEARS THROAT* ok i think i'm ok now. good job with this chapter (though i despise it greatly now and u know y) i can't wait to find out wat happens next and next time i make a suggestions, take it. XD oh and btw I'M GOING TO KILL YOU :)