rate_review Reviews

my oh my this story is so good... If you ever find inspiration again finish it please.

i can truely say it is about bloody freaking time you updated this amazing story. 1st of all jake's mom needs to seek mental help and i hope jake will have some semblance to do that for her cause we all know she needs it. 2nd awwww jake really likes danny, maybe even love and its sooo cute love them both <3. 3rd next time you take forever to update i am going to hang you upside by your toes e.e'''
overall i enjoyed this chapter and we see a new development happening with the two, jake and danny, and i can't wait to see just how their relationship turns out.
until then :D

Hey! I wondered what happened to this story! lol I re-read all 8 chapters again to re-familiarize myself w/the story. I went thru the same emotions I did the first time around: anger and rage at Danny's parents and his grandfather also, at some points. "No grandson of mine is going to be gay" or some such nonsense. Oh, and ".....his father. He gets his gayness from his side of the family. Have you seen his cousin .blah, blah (whatever his name is); he's fruitier than a box of Fruity Pebbles!" Those are hysterical lines, but really get my blood boiling! lol

I did notice tho, that since you have gotten a few more betas, the story reads much better. The majority of your grammar errors are gone. (sorry, I always notice spelling and grammar; it's the editor in me). I'm really enjoying this story; I'm glad you continued with it.

I'm glad to see Jake really has feelings for Danny and he's not using him. Jake's mom tho; what a piece of work!! I mean, my God, your kid's boyfriends or girlfriends are OFF LIMITS!!!! She's like another Stickler's mom!!! Remember, from American Pie? Altho Stickler's Mom only did a straight friend! lol

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Hopefully Danny will have a chance to ask Jake about the STD tests. Although they all used condoms; the condom coming off in Alissa is not a good thing!

It's been a while since I checked up on this and I'm happy to find a new chapter, thanks! ^^

Excellent and informative ^_^ I'm also soooo happy that you have started this up again! I'm so proud of you!! I think this is an awesome story and you write it so well! I can't wait for the next chapter you better keep me posted :p cause I know where to contact you hehehe. Excellent job again and can't wait to read more, later!

Well, I finally finished all 8 chapters! GREAT, GREAT story!!!! I am so loving it!!!!!! I just hope and pray you update before two years!!!! lol

As far as Danny's parents: no wonder his mom is so fucked up! She had to grow up w/that ignorant prick of a father! What a fucking homophobe! And blaming poor Danny on her cheating S.O.B. of a husband is pathetic; she is SO in denial! Altho Danny's father is a horrible excuse for a human being; his mother too come to think of it. To actually beat up your son, taking out all your anger over your marriage on your son just b/c he may be gay; that's pathetic!

I feel so bad for Danny; maybe he should just take Jake up on his offer and stay there. They really need to used condoms! lol

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, sooner than 2 yrs., right? Hint, hint! Hey, I noticed the last line, you spelled Alissa's name Alyssa, but in the previous chapters it was Alissa.

Anyway, Happy New Year!

I just started reading this story and I gotta say: it's great! I want to personally run a stake thru both Danny's mother and father; what assholes! Especially the father, OMG, he had a whole other family????????? AND he blamed his "wife" for their kids being screwed up???? OMG, what a fucking loser!

Anyway, yes, I was ready to skin them both alive as I was reading your very emotional story. AND, so the fuck what, who cares what Danny was doing? He wasn't murdering anyone, omg, they are fucking unbelievable! I know, there are ignorant fucks out there like Danny's parents, but omg, get a grip!

Well, awesome story and now I'm going on to ch. 2!

AWHH, at least he found sumone... But whats up wit his MOM !!!

Say WHAAAA !! haha Gurl you didnt tell me it was like dis !! haha i still enjoyd it tho !!

Dragonfoxofhell, you do know how good your story is, right? That's probably why it's killing me to have to wait! ;3 I luffle your story. *hands you a cookie*