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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update, woulda! This is off to such a great start!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting, please continue.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW
You totally captivated me with this prologue.
You must continue and soon....I really love the big-bad-ass dominant with the fragil-little and innocent submissive.
Hope to read you soon.
You totally captivated me with this prologue.
You must continue and soon....I really love the big-bad-ass dominant with the fragil-little and innocent submissive.
Hope to read you soon.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Cute start for a good romantic fantasy. Good job.
Cute start for a good romantic fantasy. Good job.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally a story that's worth reading. I've been lurking around here for something to read. It's a goood thing that i find your story. It's really cool and quite original. Highlanders and pretty boys, yummy...
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah - this is a lovely beginning to a fantasy. Both Drake and Falcon are appealing.
Being swept out of his time and space puts Drake at the disadvantage - and Falcon seems a bit cold and calculating.
Looking forward to where the story goes.
Being swept out of his time and space puts Drake at the disadvantage - and Falcon seems a bit cold and calculating.
Looking forward to where the story goes.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Drake dident seem as surprised as I thought he'd be descovering he's in a diffrent time, next chapter it'll set in mabe? ;p Eighther way, I find this interesting and I cant wait to see where you go with it! XD
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eu-la-la, what I would give to wake up in a handsome stranger's bed, lol. I'm interested in more, lovely start.