rate_review Reviews

please do contiue with this story. I love the imagery and description that you have used to create the characters. I would love to know how Fenaer became human and Ayrias next door neighbour. Id love to read a chapter on Reanef visits her skool and everyone becomes jealous. I know typical but id still love it. Please do continue!

This is a wonderful piece. I love your imagery. Please continue!

What fun! I hope you add to your story, I'd love to see where you take it.

i love what you've written so far! I like the fact that i had a great visual of what the characters looked like. It help me to see the world you are painting. Im still having trouble pronouncing the guys name. I'm sitting here trying but its not working but i like it all the same. Very exotic...please continue!! Please? It'd be a shame not to finish this story.