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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mr. Johnson is downright devious!! How could he trick Andy like that!! Sure, it was for my dirty-minded entertainment, but...eh, whatever, I enjoyed reading it!!!
Ya know, I really like how you told it sorta from Andy's perspective. not because he's a kid or anything, but because I know its very hard to write how he perceived everything while staying in third person. Maybe that didn't make since, but hopefully you get what I mean. ^^
Great story!
Ya know, I really like how you told it sorta from Andy's perspective. not because he's a kid or anything, but because I know its very hard to write how he perceived everything while staying in third person. Maybe that didn't make since, but hopefully you get what I mean. ^^
Great story!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another poor, innocent child.
But really.. couldn't he recognise the candy as one of his own body parts? o.o
nice depicting tho ^^
But really.. couldn't he recognise the candy as one of his own body parts? o.o
nice depicting tho ^^
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this is so hot! Will you do another chapter?
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a bad man, taking advantage of the kid like that. Hmm... But, as always, well written. I didn't like it much, but its personal, and nothing against your stories, of which I'm an admittedly huge fan ^__^
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's so wrong *laughs* he totally tricked that poor boy. *shrugs* oh well, it didn't really hurt him much. *shakes head* good story, bye!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You certainly have a clever imagination! The whole thing actually seems quite feasible...
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mr. J is so wrong for that one.