rate_review Reviews

Damn...that's hot. I like it.

Wow!

not signed in again of course...

That was pretty darn good. Sounds very similar to me and my girlfriend, hehe.

Great job and keep up the good work.

That was really good, and you capture the perfect sense of eroticism. Not many people can pull off good lesbian erotica, but you've really made something special here.

thanks for all the great reviews. This just makes me want to continue writing so everyone can enjoy my mind.

Dang that was sooo fucking hott I wish I had a girlfriend who would treat me that way :O''''

Ok, why can I never fnd a girlfriend like that? I always find the psychos! Ok, but in response to the story, it was great. That's all I can think to say about the story, it was really bloody amazing.

Okay, I admit, I look at stories usually to get somewhat excited, and this isn't fair to the authors because I'm previously engaged. However, your story was superb. It perfectly captivated desire, passion, gentleness, love, and I absolutely loved it. I think this may very well be the first review I've ever written for AFF.net...and I want you to know it's well founded, because, I have read a lot of erotic literature and literature in general...I've been around this website hundreds of times, and this is the first time I've been so completely compelled to tell you how great you are.

Just, thank you very much for allowing your work to be shown publically, and, keep on writing. Never stop writing, please, this is the most captivating piece of literature I may have ever read.

Well thats an interestin surprize...nice detail in the story though. soo...is this a one-shot? seems like it. just wondering.

Pretty good. Short, but has a nice set-up and general course.