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for Making It

by starvingartist114

person CelticWitch
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I would like to know where you are going with this story
and what will happen to Jonah and Aadan. That Nine is really cruel I hope
that Jonah gets back at him before the story ends. Will you please update
quicker. Thx. Happy New Year!
person Jason
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pls update this story soon.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update!
person DrkDreamer
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I'm sorry Aaden didn't make it - but interesting to see the two prisoners talk to each other.

I assume Nine is listening, too?
person DrkDreamer
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonder if this is much like 'water-boarding'?

The relationship is growing - or maybe it's just Jonah talking.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
person DrkDreamer
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really well done - the descriptions of Nine's torture and Jonah's attempts to withstand.

The end with not making it to the bed before passing out was perfect. Eagerly awaiting the morning...

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