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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice
This feels more of a 2nd chapterish kinda thing though. You should go into more detail about how the 2 met.
This feels more of a 2nd chapterish kinda thing though. You should go into more detail about how the 2 met.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay.. I don't usually post reviews, but I love your stories and feel taht I just have to review them!
I can't wait for more of this one! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!
*Bites'n'Nibbles*
I can't wait for more of this one! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!
*Bites'n'Nibbles*
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good first charpter. Now can they last a week without seeing each other again? Will their fathers find out about their love and plans? Will they be able to leave and live life with each other as they want to? The only to find out is if you continue the stoy. So, Please Continue The Story I Am Interested.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue. I enjoyed it.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok i like the story really, but so much for them waiting! Now what happens if he leaves without her. i want to read more.