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for Kisses

by tsukiROSEboy

person ree
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to keep it with one kind of way of writing. Stop switching from her/she to you because it's confusing on how you have it written. Pick one way and it'll be fine.