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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it. the flow is a litle choppy (not a flame, please don't be mad)but the plot/story seems really good. i'll be cheaking in on this one. please e-mail me when you post a new chapter.
tears_of_lightning@yahoo.com
~Audra~
tears_of_lightning@yahoo.com
~Audra~
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! And beautiful, poor Shiro! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic! ^-^
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good but it could be more then jst a one shot there seems like there's so much more to it then jst that...but hey thats jst my oppion luvya Aya
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too good for words. Im speechless!!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn... continue please!