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I do relaize that yes, in all logical sence, the loss of an eye would be deadly. But this was not meant to be a piece of "reality" per say.

In all actuality, for those who don't know..and maybe I shoul dhave stated this earlier. This is another one of those Backstory stories I do for my more twisted RP characters. This time, the character involved just happens to be of a mythical race called the Unda. They are like Merfolk, but instead of mamalian tails (like dolfins) they have shark tails. They also have the ability to get legs without selling their souls/voices/what not.

The brothers in question are actually of the Great White viriety... So, I attribute the magic of the Unda race to keeping the poor kid from kicking the bucket.

Very interesting, a few spelling errors, though.

The thing I have the biggest problem with is the loss of the eye. That would nearly kill him and he couldn't be left there without bleeding to death. The damage would require immediate medical attention.

Muhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha -loves- xD

very haunting. you write really well; great story.

this was actually very good, made my tummy hurt, but very good all the same. I think you would like my Fic at the moment.

I would like to see more of this, I give it five little plus sign... star... pieces of shit. YEAH!

I love this