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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an amazing chapter. I really like how incredibly original this story is. Please continue because I'm dying to know what is going to happen now that Hades is no longer in a mortal body.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this much better. Good job on reediting by the way I wanted to ask if you were going to change settings into the underworld at all I think that it would be interesting change of events.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plzzzz plzzz updatee
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this revamped version. there is more depths to Hades and I like his mental debate and knarling guilt. continue the good work.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gee, didnt expect you t rewrite all of it, but its a much better read now. dont worry if u dont get many reviews til chap-4, lots read the 1st version. looks like y changed hades' and persephone's personalities a bit, and there's a definite way 4 him t dicover she's a goddess now, or at least 4 the gods t kno she's missing. i'll b checkin' 4 the next update. ^___^x
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I have GOT to tell you, this story is so hot!
I mean, eesh, get me a fan or something! Lol. The sex scenes are awesome. But don't get me wrong, I don't just love it for the sex part. The psychology of the characters is awesome. I date a dom, and yes, I can identify with Persephone/Arista. Awesome jobs on the names and background. I'd like to explore Hades/Samuel's side of things, (his background, maybe) and see about Vincent, but I'm sure it will all come to pass. The characters, though they have their flaws, really seem likeable, and very detailed. I like it. I absolutely CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! Amazing job, and try to update soon! I know it's hard! Lol, Manda.
I mean, eesh, get me a fan or something! Lol. The sex scenes are awesome. But don't get me wrong, I don't just love it for the sex part. The psychology of the characters is awesome. I date a dom, and yes, I can identify with Persephone/Arista. Awesome jobs on the names and background. I'd like to explore Hades/Samuel's side of things, (his background, maybe) and see about Vincent, but I'm sure it will all come to pass. The characters, though they have their flaws, really seem likeable, and very detailed. I like it. I absolutely CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! Amazing job, and try to update soon! I know it's hard! Lol, Manda.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story of old meets new. Should be very interesting to see how long it takes either of them to discover who the other really is.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.