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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Goodness gracious. can this get any better?! Love it! :)
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OKAY SWEETY NO WRITER'S BLOCK BIG NO NO YUO'VE GOT A LOT OF FANS OUT HERE ENTRAPPED IN THE STORY THAT YOU ABSOLUTELY MUST CONTINUE. K . sO YOU'VE GOT WRITERS BLOCK TRY TO CONTINUE THE STORYLINE OF PERSEPHONE AND HADES HE TAKES HER TO THE UNDERWORLD AND COERCES HER TO LOVE HIM. rEAD SABINE WOMEN BY SCRIBE MOZZELLE TO GET INSPIRED IN THE COERCION. BY THE WAY IT BE CUTE IF U ADDED A CHAPTER WITH CEREBUS THE GIANT 3 HEADED DOG BEING FRIENDLY WITH PERSEPHONE.
LOLA
LOLA
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! cliffie!! plz continue
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome! Occasionaly your spelling is a little off, but otherwise it's a very good story. Please finish it.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving it! please keep going
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooo good! im dying for an update! pleaseeeee try and get the next chapter out as soon as u can!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it love it! great characterization... makes them more 3D. 'bout time they figured each other out. :)
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this version a lot better. It seems to flow more and the additional scenes were effective. :)
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang! this story is freaking awesome. Love all the description... can I just say ouch! Poor Arista. :)
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its about time this happened. I was waiting for this. *sigh* But right at the of the chapter my reaction was "Fuck!" cause I wanted to read MORE. I hope you post a new chapter soon :)