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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vundeba!
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story.. it makes me want to go get a pie and eat it while thinking of it. Crazy, I know, but makes sense in my head.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well - Chapter 5 was certainly a cliff-hanger.
Just who is this mysterious buyer who horrifies Trenton?? (Hope he ends up horrifying him MUCH more!)
Just who is this mysterious buyer who horrifies Trenton?? (Hope he ends up horrifying him MUCH more!)
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying all the bits you're adding - like Hugh and the other slave.
Looking forward to finding out more!
Looking forward to finding out more!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really going somewhere, I love it
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the name "Fagger" made me laugh, really. really. hard
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far...very creative.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. The 'bones' of the training center are being filled out nicely - as well as Hugh's and Jessui's characters.
Looking forward to your next update.
Looking forward to your next update.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is actually very very good. I love the way you write, and its... rather naughty.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the sort of story that one is a little ashamed to admit they like.
But I like it and I'll be watching for updates. (Just don't tell my sister...)
But I like it and I'll be watching for updates. (Just don't tell my sister...)