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all slave stories with bishies usually sound th esame.
but i must admit your has a special flavour.
so far i lik eit very much.
very much indeed.
i'm curious about j's abilities and who/what his new master is.
i'm specialy curious about the moon creature.
good thinking with the reptile skin circle around the eye,although the snake pupil being in the other eye is overdoing it a bit.
i don't like hugh's plan of killing the master but ehy he was a cool chara in the first couple of chapters.
i hope you wont abandon your story.
i would realy like to read it to the end.

I am hooked on this story! Please update soon!

really enjoyable i just read the whole ten chappies and i thoughraly enjoyed it your characters are rather intrigueing i hope i see another update soon
have a cookie :D

this is very odd, but in a good way. i am incredibly facinated with this entire world youve created. i hope your story is long and goes into greater detail about all of the creatures and the 'new' and 'old' orlds and such. keep up the great work

Interesting chap ^^ Yay, lemons ahoy :)

Quick-quick-quick!!!

Oh way freaky! I wonder what Jess saw ... and how Douya reacted to Ly was pretty humerous.

Hm, wonder why the master is so interested in Douya ... and Hugh and Ly (eek, can't spell his name) make an interesting pair.

this is really good I can't wait to find out what comes next. the master sounded sinister and simply delicious. the mystery between hugh and lydriel is also very interesting.

Ah, can't wait to meet this master :)