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I loved this chapter:) And you did a good job with the talk. I think it was perfect and exactly one way any good parent would do it. What James did was bad though. How do you tell your kids their mother only threw him out because he was drunk and having a tantrum? Not only is that bad to tell your kids, even if it was true, but on top of that, it was completely untrue. He obviously doesn't want to work things out because that's not the kind of thing you do to someone you want to work things out with. Jackass. I hope he loses it all in the end. And I'm happy for Richie, that his relationship with his son is good again. He really didn't deserve the way he was being treated, though it's a bit easier to understand why his son would be upset with his dad filling his head with all kinds of nonsense. I'm glad his daughter didn't believe it though. I'm guessing it would be partially to do with the fact that fathers and sons tend to be bonded while mothers and daughters tend to be bonded. Or maybe I'm overanalyzing, I dunno:)

As for Randy and Shay, THE BABIES ARE COMING!!! :) I'm excited for them, though I'm upset at Aunt Corrine for putting a damper on the whole thing. Can't deal with gossip for someone she's supposed to love. Gossip can be difficult but when you love someone, you accept them and their choices (unless you see those choices are causing them physical, mental and/or emotional harm) and you step forward to defend them when it's necessary. You don't decide their wrong and not even try to see why their doing what their doing, or in this case why their with who their with. Shame shame shame Corrine. Oh well, at least there are good things coming. *And on a slightly different note, Jack really is a little sweetheart. He did such a good job raising him. I love that he wanted to play but when he saw his mother wasn't feeling well, he just went to lay down with him. I can't think of too many kids I know who wouldn't have thrown a tantrum. I just want to squeeze him, he's so cute. If I ever do have kids (which I'm not planning too, but who knows), I would hope I'd do as good a job as Shay did to produce him.

And of course, Larry (remembered his name this time:D) and Bryant. Little disappointed not to see any of Bryant in this chapter, but I can't wait to see what Larry does for him. He deserves all good things and I hope Larry can help him.

Oh and one more thing, during Richie's conversation that chapter goes italics and stays italics the rest of the way through. I don't think it was supposed to do that so I thought I'd let you know.

Wow...Randy's aunt is a bonified bitch! lol
And I LOVED the talk that Richie had with the children. I can't believe that James lied to them...men! :P
But I'm so excited! Shay's about to have the babies!!!!
Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next update!
Oh by the way, I want to be on the update list for Our Humble Little Dwelling!!!
I hope you update that story soon too!

yeay... Bryant is ok. cheerios to him. and *pinches Jack he's so cute* thanks for the great great update. enjoy your weekend. ^^

Bryant needs happiness in his life! He has suffered so much! :(
I don't really like Lerry, but I would like to see how he and Bry get back together.
But if you don't plan for them to get back together, then I hope that Bry can find a man
who can make him happy!
I really hope Bry gets better! :)

Hey! Long time no review. Or read. Hmmm it seems I've missed so much in my internet absence. But I still love this story of yours. It's so addicting and your writing is so beautiful. Man you make a poor queen like myself cry nearly everytime I read your story. (I've reread it every update). I just love you. If you ever decided to quit this I'd faint. Btw it'd be nice of you to add me to your update list. lisakuralover@yahoo.com God I hate my email. Anywho Toodles. I'm off to read this new update. And I swear I'll review better.

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I hope Bry gets better. I mean despite what Larry did to him, I do want to see them back together...but not until Larry proves himself, so until then Bry should just lay low for awhile. As for Richie and James, I hope they work something out as well. Since you've introduced them as a couple they've been so cute, but then again being cute together isn't a reason to take your cheating husband back...as for Shay, Jack, and Randy I hope they just get to be the happy little family they're trying to so hard to establish! I can't wait for the twins to be born! Well hope to read more soon...oh one last thing...what happened to Randy's aunt?

I'm reviewing again! After reading some reviews above me, I now to think that maybe Bry needs a NEW man in his life. As much as I would like to see him and Larry together, if push comes to shove I wouldn't mind too much if a new man came and showed Bry his worth. Well just had to write that before signing off!

Aaiiieee! I had fallen out of keeping track of this for a while (so many things bothering me lately haha ugh college), it was great to catch up again. You're still doing great work and making me jitter around to know what happens next--looking forward to the next twist!

fuck larry!! you go bryant! tell that little worm that he hasn't got any more chances left!!! i hope larry withers in regret for the rest of the story. he doesn't deserve forgiveness. i mean- the only reason he's back is because he found out his boyfriend was a hoochie (sweet justice).

bryant deserves lovin' from a new man. a better man. great chapter!

YAY!!! Update. And it was a good one to. I think Bry might just think about taking Larry back. I don't know if that is a good thing or not. I'm happy Shay and Randy worked things out. And oh James is just evil. Just think, before all of this I actually thought he was a loving father. Now I know he just uses his children as pawn pieces. That is so not cool. I can't wait for him to get what he deserves. Thanks again for the update, it was worth the wait. Please update soon.