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Ohhh,Larry is getting some alone time and all it took was Shay going into LABOR! :) I loved that scene between the two of them especially the recantation of time past. I think it made them both deeper characters. And I actually admire Bry for making Larry sweat. Also the idea to have Larry build something or do something physical to demonstrate his feelings was genius because he has already been painted as a man of few words and not very evocative so expressing himself in a manual labor of love was very apropos. I guess to sum it up I loved this ch and I was already giddy before reading it when I got the news there was an update. Thank you!

Yes, It's about time the kids knew the turth!!! I hope James' balls and penis rots and falls of or that he gets an STD!!! We all know that he will soon be coming around back to Richie crawling on his knees like a pussy!!!!! Be done with him!!! Gosh, this story is fiction and you already havin me rantin and raving like a crazy person!!!!!!!!!

(I accidently hit 'review' before I was done >.>)

I can't believe that Corrine turned out to be such a bitch. I thought after Shay told her off, she would eventually come around. I certaintly never thought she'd disown Randy for the sake of her reputation. That's horrible. I hope she gets whatever's coming to her.

I also want to see more of what's going on with Bryant and Larry. It seems like they're going to get back together eventually. Ofcourse, not before alot of effort on Larry's part. But I think Bryant needs him to heal. And I think one of Larry's biggest obstacles isn't going to be getting Bryant to forgive him, but getting Shay to.

And I hope James gets his nads ripped off in some horribly painful accident. Or he needs another confrontation with Randy's fist >.> yeah.

As eager as I am to get to the twins' birth, I don't like that 6 month time gap there. I think that there was way too much going on to skip ahead that much.

I'm glad that Tristan doesn't hate Richie anymore, because that was just too heartbreaking to read.

wooo hoo! something's (or should i say, someone[s]) are going to pop out!! babies are ugly, at first, that is. then they get cute, until they grow into annoying 2 year olds (but still cute), then into cute children, then into (again) annoying teenagers, then into adult-children, until they- er. that ramble was pretty pointless. but anyway, great convo piece. shay, poor shay. i bet all the women are just jealous. that's why they talk. to make them feel better about their own insecurities with the husbands in the sack.

woo!

Thanks for the update! I love your stories. It's like going back to a country diner and eating a big slice of pie with whipped cream on top. I especially like the colloquialisms, it makes the setting and atmosphere really specific and realistic. And the discussion between Richie and the kids was really believable. Looking forward to seeing the babies!

Oh yey! So happy Richie finally got to discuss with the kids. That James... poisoning the children's minds. You should let me slay him, I swear. Anyway, looking forward to see the babies pop out. Don't be evil with our Shay, ok? Easy birth? And hurt Corinne a little, maybe just a little, cos in a way I do understand her. Peer pressure and all that... After having lived a life in the middle of a community, it'd be hard for anyone to face disdain from it. Also, looking forward to see Bry&Larry. Pls update soon! Hugs, SH

Wow these people in this town are really shitty. Especially the family members. Aunt Corrine is a bitch. It is clear she cares more about what people say then her own family. Even if she did cut off contact they probably would still talk about her. The talk with the kids was very appropriate, considering everything that is going on. I can't wait for your next update!

This is such a sweet story!
You've pulled me backwards and forwards and made me feel so many emotions for
the characters.
You're a great writer!
I'm looking forward to the next update!
R x

I did like the chat with the kids it was very cutsy and long over due. However, I have to say IT'S ABOUT TIME! I feel like Shay's been pregnant forever! I can't hardly wait to see the twins.