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This is just an awesome story!! I've been reading this off and on all day long today and i can't get enough!! Your writting just sucks me in and i'm so glad i found this story!! Not done yet with catching up, but loving every minute of it!! Thanks so much for sharing!!

I just found this story and it is awesome!!!!!!!! I am hooked and i want more!!!!!!!!!

It's OK that you got carried away with Larry and Bry! I find their relationship interesting.
I am thrilled that Shay is finally about to have his babies! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

sorry i too lazy to sign in. was caught up reading this. damn u have a true masterpiece in your hands. i LOVE THIS. PLEASE add me to your list.

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i love how u portray your characters and diffferent stories...yet how everything ties together...>.< wuvvle it. update soon!!! i havent been on aff for a while so...this has definitely brought me back *grins*

All I can say is more! Really great chapter! I loved it!

yeay the twins are coming out. they'll be as cute as jack. huhuhu i hope bry doesn't get hurt again. *gives u a cookie* thanks for the update

Hey, I've reached your story yesterday by surprise and I really really love it. Partly I was so worried about poor Shay because he didn't had a beautiful life. He is such a lovely guy, a son who cares so much and he is a very lovingly mom. He really deserves someone who cares about him and loves him and I'm happy he finally found Randy bringing luck in his life :-). At so many parts of the story I shook my hand over my mouth and thought 'oh god, no more chaos to this poor guy', you've made me taking a deep breath pretty often and I thought 'this all can't happen', Larry, who kicked Shay and his baby out of the house, his mother, who was taken away and now also meany James who only wants to hurt Shay by taking his baby away from him.....I hope so much you'll not let him do this....Shay should take Randys advice and fight...I'm so curious about how the story goes on and I really would prefer a happy end, ok ;-). I hope you will update very soon.
Greetings
Sandra
BTW, would you give me a notice if you're updating and maybe about your other stuff *puppyeyes*

This was beautifully written, I loved the conversation between
Bryant and Larry, it flowed really well.
Gah I'm stuck between hating Larry and kind of feeling sorry for him, though
I'm leaning more towards "You're a fucking idiot!"
I hope everything turns out ok, I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
Lovely update!
~R~

What an "aww..." chapter... Are they going to end up together in the end? I'm angry with Larry, for being such a bitch for long. I guess a second chance is a long shot, huh? Anyway, looking forward to the babies coming up. *does happy dance. Babies, yey!! Also, I want to see Richie kick James' ass. Cos James is a bastard and I hate him. You must give him to me, I will feed him to my vampires and demons :P. Pls update soon, hugs, Scarlet

Another wonderful chapter!!!!!
Gosh, I hope Larry is on the right track with Bry.
Awww can't believe Shay is about to have the babies!!!!
I still think that Shay, Richie, James, and Randy need to have "group" discussion.
As much as I dislike James, I still think that he and Richie need a chance to work things out between them.
But otherwise love the story thus far, like usual.
And I have all fingers crossed that you get out of your writer's block for 'Our Humble Little Dwelling'.
I freaking love that story!
Hopefully the update will be before the end of the year?!?!
And maybe we'll have more than one chapter.
And I think the story should go on til Keith has his baby.
Then the epilogue could be like a few years later, haha.
Hope that helped a lil.
Update soon!!!!