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Finally Richie got rid of that asshole! He deserves better!
I'm hoping that Bry and Lerry get back together in the end! Great chapter, it was very funny!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

wholly mother of cows!!! james IS an asshole! i hope richie finds someone better. and larry. gosh i wish he would just die. i know it's harsh but i still don't think he could ever be forgiven. even though he seems like the only man that could make bry happy, and bry deserves to be happy. but does it have to be larry? why not some dark mysterious dashing older man come onto the scene and sweep bry off on some romantic ocean trip? anyway, its your story so....eh. i guess it's also good for the story structurally in how real life is often like that: cheaters are often taken back in by the one they wronged. if there was a 'happy/ideal' ending to every relationship it would cheapen the story, ya know? what ever you do though is brilliant because you write things so well anyway.

you might want to change the "5lb 6oz" thing (not the actual numbers you wrote down, it's just an example) to "five pounds six ounces"..since when people speak they don't actually 'say' "lbs" (i like to think of it as "libs" in my mind though) and stuff....

james = asshole
richie = douche
yay!! but not everyone's an angel so we appreciate the diversity and all. great chapter!

by 'richie' i mean 'larry'

so many names..

yeah, an absolutely adorable chapter. I'm so happy for Shay that he's seeing finally the bright sight of his life. I wonder what will happen now with Shay and Larry.....and James absolutely sucks!!!! Keep on writing soon :-)
Greetings
Sandra

*does happy dance. So glad you finally updated. I am reconsidering my punishment of James, since you seem to have a better one in store for him :D. Still hoping for a Larry/Bry happy ending and I am very curious what will happen next. Will James flip because of Richie's decision and attack Shay? Update soon! Hugs, Scarlet

Aww that chapter was cute!
I feel sorry for Richie, poor guy, I'm glad he's going for a divorce!
Haha the bit where Shay crushed Randy's hand made me laugh! Bless them.
Loved this chapter!
~R~

Oh I have such evil thoughts in my head about James. He is a sad little man with no concern for anyone but himself.
On to more pleasant things...the twins sound sooooo cute. I'm happy they are all healthy and Shay is ok.
I can't wait for the next chapter...especially the long over due Shay and Larry confrontation.

well it was about time ritchie cut him off.

Wonderful chapter like always!
I don't want Richie and James to split! T_T
Please let them work it out!
But I love Shay's labor scene haha!
Poor Jack was just watching the whole thing with those famous two fingers in his mouth! CUTE!
But Shay and Larry definately need to have a talk and reconcile.
But happy to know that my ideas helped with Our humble little dwelling!
Hope to read more soon!

Your biggest fan, i

numoon3!!!!!!!!!!!

Haha couldn't resist!

Yeah, it's gonna be a long hard road for Larry to earn back his family. I can't imagine how shay's going to react to seeing his father at the hospital. Or Randy's reacion D= especially since he's probably still really upset from his talk with his aunt earlier.

So how goes things for James and Richie? I was kind of interested to see if Richies little talk with the kids changed their (especially Tristan's) opinion of their father or not. I mean I can't really see it affecting Sabi very much since she's way too little to comprehend what's going on except that daddy's staying somewhere else right now. And even Katie may be too young. But Tristan knows that James did something bad and hurt their mama and lied about it.

bah....anyway...excellent chapter as always =] Eagerly awaiting the next one (and the babies' birth!)