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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooohh drama, i like it =0). more, please?
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had so much faith in Randy's mental capacity but after his reaction I don't know any more. I mean I understand his hesitancy especially if he's thinking long-term but he could have definitely handled it better. I think he's on track about going to the house to talk to Shay about it. And Larry I dread to think how he's going to fix things. I hope all he does is just walk out on them and not anything violent....
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will Shay's mom and dad ever have a happy marriage?
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What does that mean that Shay is such a girl?
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how sad!! And wow, those are some crazy rumors...but thats how it is, eh? Peh, lovely story so far.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
Hi, Scribbles05. Pretty good chapter. Shay is such a girl, but then again it is a MPREG story. It is very realistic otherwise, almost like a small town documentary. Shay is not going to go unbalanced, I hope. Very good chapter, Scrib, thank you.
Hi, Scribbles05. Pretty good chapter. Shay is such a girl, but then again it is a MPREG story. It is very realistic otherwise, almost like a small town documentary. Shay is not going to go unbalanced, I hope. Very good chapter, Scrib, thank you.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the first three chapters immensely. I think your character development is wonderful and I'm so happy that you've humanized Shay by having him recognize that his previous actions have now labeled him. But I'm especially glad that he didn't leave town and now has to face his demons. Thank you for a wonderful story so far and keep up the good work.
Shelly
Shelly
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh small town gossip! I came from a small town and I remember that that was the one thing I hated the most. It can turn the nicest people into the meanest most vindictive judgmental bigots! I don't think I like Corinne so much now. Maybe she will redeem herself later on.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The baby is great!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow poor shay has a lot on his shoulders!