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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Wonderful! Oh, and I know what you're talking about, with the things from Spain, I saw them on the food network the other day.... yes, I watch the food network, it's like porn when your fridge is empty..... right, I REALLY loved this chapter! I'm jumping up and down on my couch with anticipation for the next chapter! ^_^ Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Update soon for more yamyams!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you must update
you fucking must
this story is amazing
and i need to know what
happens with shay and randy!
you fucking must
this story is amazing
and i need to know what
happens with shay and randy!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapter, wonderful personality insight. I'm really hoping that Corrine doesn't turn out to be some ignorant, small-minded, small-town person.
Again excellent job, I'm officially hooked.
Again excellent job, I'm officially hooked.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you've written this story (I tried to read another of your story, but the too many thoughs inserted in between ~ bothered me a great deal). the plot seems well developped (not too rushed), and the characters are interesting and sweet. I hope that you'll update soon!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 4
Lovely chapter, Scribbles05, it is a real pleasure to read. I like our little Shay a lot. He is the most insecure person out there. Not only he was deprived of affection and appreciation but he has this horror of maddness looming over his head. I mean, his Mama was not always like that, so how Shay is to know if he himself will be OK in the future. That sure would make the boy selfconscious and vary of long term commitments. Plus he would not trust to anyone who'd tell that they care about him. Randy sure will have to work hard to get anywhere with Shay. Next chapter soon, please;)
Lovely chapter, Scribbles05, it is a real pleasure to read. I like our little Shay a lot. He is the most insecure person out there. Not only he was deprived of affection and appreciation but he has this horror of maddness looming over his head. I mean, his Mama was not always like that, so how Shay is to know if he himself will be OK in the future. That sure would make the boy selfconscious and vary of long term commitments. Plus he would not trust to anyone who'd tell that they care about him. Randy sure will have to work hard to get anywhere with Shay. Next chapter soon, please;)
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I really enjoy reading this, thanx!!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow this story comes across to me as very emotional, even tho these 4 chapters have been relatively descriptive. Everything is just so...sad. Which is a good thing in my perspective.
I cannot wait for future chapters to be updated. And you got yourself a new reviewer.
I cannot wait for future chapters to be updated. And you got yourself a new reviewer.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wai! I loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Oh, and yamyams are japanese cookie-like sticks that you dip in different flavored chocolate, while pocky is the same cookie-like stick with the flavor and chocolate already on it. They're really good. ^_^ Hehe, update soon for more yamyams! I must say this is one of my absolute favorite fics ever. ^_^
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have me a little worried about what Larry is going to do...
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope shay talks to him.